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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to kattejuice [2015-07-31 12:45:12 +0000 UTC]

You mean watercolor commissions or the paintings themselves?  

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kattejuice In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2015-07-31 14:52:52 +0000 UTC]

The paintings themselves

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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to kattejuice [2015-07-31 14:55:08 +0000 UTC]

I can offer them for sale. I'm only really clingy with the cougar watercolor piece, I don't wanna let go of that ;w; 

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kattejuice In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2015-07-31 18:03:21 +0000 UTC]

I understand. The cougar one is fantastic! I'd cling too
Luckily for you, I'm interested in this one. How much would you want for it?

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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to Romeh96 [2015-07-31 12:05:07 +0000 UTC]

can you point out exactly what could have been done better with the anatomy? this isn't really helpful criticism. 

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Romeh96 In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2015-07-31 12:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Crap, sorry, I'm tired and I thought I did ^^"
To me it looks like the back leg is really awkward and almost misshapen? Kind of like the thigh is, to put it bluntly, a little too fat? I don't really know how to explain it, sorry, but I looked up a picture of a lion and it just looked kind of off to me.
Also with the proportions, I feel like the belly is a bit too big to go with how the spine bending, unless you've made it like that for a reason.
I don't know if this helps at all as I was sort of struggling to explain it, but I tried my best and hopefully you find it helpful

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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to Romeh96 [2015-07-31 12:42:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^ I agree the back leg could have been done better. I think the perspective is off.  About the belly, I think the belly is ok, but the perspective is off as well, if you compare it with this photo ref I have used: 500px.com/photo/101305827/join…  

But it was my first drawing of the four watercolor series, and it is not my best because i used to learn to work with the medium. It already got a bit ruined by my sloppy white acryclic highlights (switched over to white gel pen in the other paintings) >_>  Sadly there is no undo button with watercolor painting, so not much can be edited. 

However, thank you for the feedback ^^ 

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Romeh96 In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2015-07-31 12:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Going by that picture, the belly is fine haha, it really just depends on what you're using as a reference and what kind of style you have
Yeah, I think the perspective is a bit off, though it's pretty good for the first of the 4.

I actually prefer the white acrylic highlights compared to the gel pen highlights. I think it works better with how watercolors come out as they're always kind of blotchy, and the acrylic's kind of similar appearance on it blends better.

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RedbuzzarddArt In reply to Romeh96 [2015-07-31 13:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Sadly my acrylics are no good they are very blotchy and just hard to work with.  maybe ima buy new ones in the future. The gel pens work a little better but I notice its blending with the color of the paint >_<   

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Romeh96 In reply to RedbuzzarddArt [2015-07-31 13:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that sucks. I recently got some very good acrylics and paintbrushes, very easy to work with. I wish I could share them with you haha

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