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Published: 2016-06-06 00:03:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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20/350I need a lot of face practice
Lately it has become better!12/02/2016
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As it says in your description you need a bit of practice so you probably wanted the critiques to help improve?e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Soo you can see the erased lines and to avoid that you'd need to outline the face with a light pencil (H-H2) until you are sure you got them right.
I also think you got something wrong with the proportions as the ear is usually farther down (normally the upper part is about on a level with the eyes) and the forehead is a bit higher.
I like the style of the lips and your pencil lines! Also her expression looks very cool. Seems like you know the basic style of manga art just the facial proportions trouble you a bit but I'm sure you'll work that out (:
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Thank you for your critique, this is something I made months ago for a challenge I am still doing. I guess I became better but I'll upload some recent work later, thank you for your advice anyway ^.^
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Oh okay cool I'm very curious about your improvement!
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I'll post them as soon as I'm able too in my summer holiday!
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