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This was one of those "1:00AM" ideas; I was lying in bed thinking "I really need to get this down..." XD My sister helped a little with the scripting, she's laughed her way through more bad Mary Sue fics than I have.

I really hope people'll get the joke But I guess anyone who's been within a few miles of any major fanfiction community should know of the frightening number of badly written Mary Sue fics out there...


-2 hours drawing/inking, 5-6 colouring, Photoshop 7
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Capt-J-Dawson [2020-05-30 23:00:11 +0000 UTC]

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shadow1490 [2019-05-08 23:36:06 +0000 UTC]

can i used your comic for a comic dub

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Solarzilla [2018-11-10 21:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Isn't Goku himself kinda like a mary sue?

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Shivanaskya In reply to Solarzilla [2018-12-05 12:56:27 +0000 UTC]

No he's not. He worked for everything he got. And carries he burden of everyone on his shoulders without asking for eternal worship.Β 

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ravenf6 [2018-07-26 01:07:28 +0000 UTC]

The Shooting of Mary McSue.Β 


Β This came to mind after reading a good bit of Robert W. Service.

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TheJesterArt [2018-03-17 00:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Really, just saiyan OCs are Sues and Stus, like, always

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Ex-MachinArt In reply to TheJesterArt [2018-03-17 00:57:15 +0000 UTC]

*A N G E R Y*

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TheJesterArt In reply to Ex-MachinArt [2018-03-17 16:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Saekato [2017-12-29 14:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Thats sooo funny!!! Well done

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Oracledk [2017-11-22 05:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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minecraftian216 [2017-10-12 14:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Y'know, what makes a Mary Sue a Mary Sue isn't overpoweredness or complete "perfection," it's how the story, characters, and setting shift and bend to accomodate a character who simply must not be.

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ThrownAxe9 In reply to minecraftian216 [2019-03-16 02:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Yea

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Navneet0Hathoa [2017-04-23 13:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Wao it takes you quit a while for making

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soraissupercute [2017-02-16 02:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Lol My Rose Isn't Perfect In Fact I Like My Non Perfect Clumsy Rose Β 

Rose: Please Just Stop Sora * Facepalm *Β 

Why Do You Guys Hate On Me So Much I Give You Love QAQ

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sonbreezie [2016-12-18 03:19:02 +0000 UTC]

And all because the author, Lisa, had a PURE UNADULTERED crush on Vegeta and she needs to be forbid from all human contact. Lisa Magenta Von Dark is HORRIBLE! Danielle Otaka is the BEST self-insert Mary Sue!

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Dewani90 In reply to sonbreezie [2016-12-18 04:44:59 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea who this Lisa is, but she sounds disappointing, any link to that?

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sonbreezie In reply to Dewani90 [2016-12-18 14:17:15 +0000 UTC]

I made her up

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Crimson-Kaizer [2016-10-12 22:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Three in one week?!

Someone out there is making sues at a rapid pace.

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TheFlyingEyeball In reply to Crimson-Kaizer [2017-05-08 21:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Sues is the type of characters crazy fans make. They break the canon as we see above. And they unexplainably powerful and have relationships with canon characters.

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Vashkunthestampede [2016-10-11 05:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this!! Mary sues are the abominations of all fanfiction!Β  Β 

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metalsonic612 [2016-09-12 23:40:22 +0000 UTC]

you can't be 3 halves of something

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Shivanaskya [2016-08-03 23:16:39 +0000 UTC]

I can't see It...

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TMNTFanGirl2 [2016-07-27 00:30:33 +0000 UTC]

This is funny, but now I can't read it bc the link is broken

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Shinta-Girl [2016-07-26 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]

i canΒ΄t see ;-;

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pyroix [2016-06-08 09:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Omg HALP meh I'm dyin from laughter

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NightfireXD [2016-05-23 04:11:58 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Sukithefusion [2015-12-27 18:40:00 +0000 UTC]

What are Mary Sues?

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artycomicfangirl In reply to Sukithefusion [2016-01-18 11:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Mary Sues are female OCs that are usually too overpowered and supposedly have no flaws and can do anything and have every power in the world without any consequences. They are said to be perfect in every way, shape, and get quite annoying. Mary sues also do have the tendency to ruin the universes that they are made for and can make characters out of character if they are paired up with them. However, canon characters can sometimes be Mary Sues.

This is my interpretation of a Mary Sue, but I hope this helps

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Shivanaskya In reply to artycomicfangirl [2016-08-03 23:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Mary sues are also these emotionally unstable weak women with tragic pasts and some how the Canon character (who the writer probably has a crush on) will fall in love with their OC.

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DannyWapBang In reply to Shivanaskya [2021-05-17 21:48:34 +0000 UTC]

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Sukithefusion In reply to artycomicfangirl [2016-01-23 02:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Kanade42 [2015-12-21 01:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Totally...

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Nemesisprime91 [2015-10-05 23:27:36 +0000 UTC]

With DB Xenoverse, the Marys have expanded their ways.

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LightningtheHedgHog2 [2015-09-24 16:26:02 +0000 UTC]

xD

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ShadowPikachuGirl [2015-09-14 16:56:00 +0000 UTC]

OMG LOL!

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kittenlover1950 [2015-06-29 22:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Lol!

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PhantasmicYouth [2015-06-22 16:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Nyahaha... yeeaaaah.

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VEGETAHATESCOMICS [2015-06-18 01:16:54 +0000 UTC]

so trunks kills now taking after his father in youth

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123icoo [2015-06-07 08:28:24 +0000 UTC]

that escalated quickly...

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Susana101 [2015-05-10 07:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Well

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Spartan30000 [2015-05-05 20:12:39 +0000 UTC]

so much for that immediate regeneration power XD

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sonbreezie In reply to Spartan30000 [2016-12-18 03:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, she regenerated. And Lisa Magenta Von Dark ran off with Vegeta, because the author Lisa McCall actually wants to fuck Vegeta. Check her out sometime!

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Spartan30000 In reply to sonbreezie [2016-12-18 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]

*a gust of wind breezes by, picking up some leaves as it does so* Β  Β  OKΒ  Β 

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Mystery-Vixen [2015-01-03 10:53:01 +0000 UTC]

So Perfect. I get sick of these too. Thank god Trunks was able to act fast before she shipped herself with Vegeta, Goku, Gohan, Piccolo, Krillin (....Maybe not Krillin), Yamcha, Freeza, Cell, Kamai, Popo, Radditz, Napa, Goten, and himself.
Seriously, Hilarious!

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sonbreezie In reply to Mystery-Vixen [2016-12-18 03:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Lisa Magenta Von Dark, as she's called, shipped herself with Vegeta because the author Lisa McCall is literally -- and dangerously -- in love with Vegeta... I mean, she actually made a marriage certificate, claims they have CHILDREN, and photoshops pictures of the two together! EW! Oh and check out the fanfics where it's ACTUALLY Lisa McCall, not Von Dark... GROSS!!!

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KouTheMad [2014-12-31 08:00:36 +0000 UTC]

They are doing God's work.

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sonbreezie In reply to KouTheMad [2016-12-18 03:22:04 +0000 UTC]

No! I like Lisa McCall!

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Dewani90 [2014-12-03 06:22:30 +0000 UTC]

i think i watched a video from some guy called vejito14 where he (already a fusion of goku and vegeta) fused with gogeta that had the sharingan for some reason, and became gogeta supersayan 4 (in a permanent fusion using a yugioh polymerization card) and he had the power of the magenkyo sharingan and the purple eyed power, dunno what's it called, then he fused with kaguya from naruto to become in all extensions of the word... a God (that had the powers of the sage of the six ways also), defeated superman one million and his enemy that fused with all the characters of the marvel universe, another loquendero and dunno what else to become a god also (with his head in the body of bills)... man, i didn't wanted to watch the video after the fusions... way junky to be enjoyable.

i liked your comic better, finished the sue before she could do any lasting damage.

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sonbreezie In reply to Dewani90 [2016-12-18 03:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Any lasting damage? Yeah right! Check out the author of this Sue!

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SkydragonX64 [2014-11-04 22:54:18 +0000 UTC]

LOL sounds like every sonic fan character.Β 

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