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root-kite — u have very lips

Published: 2012-04-03 22:31:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 607; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Very (unlike) me.
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Comments: 6

myloveliestsequence [2012-05-02 21:52:09 +0000 UTC]

sur you! what a hey prise.

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nonculture [2012-04-24 23:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Interesting and musical, but can't connect.

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seeyouinjune [2012-04-19 09:11:06 +0000 UTC]

I once used the Fibonacci sequence as a pick up line.

no joke.

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cmrlj [2012-04-09 19:05:44 +0000 UTC]

galaxies, small flowers... i like that.

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AbCat [2012-04-04 11:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Loving how the fragmentation and omission leaves most of this to the imagination. Making the reader work for the meaning. Not sure I'd call it concrete in the strictest sense of the form, but I like it nonetheless.

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root-kite In reply to AbCat [2012-04-04 14:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It's funny, I haven't written like this in about a year. Just popped out of me yesterday (and I haven't even been reading Cummings...). But I notice that even here I'm manipulating sounds. Fun!

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