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FauLTYMOoSe [2010-05-26 04:28:08 +0000 UTC]

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This is a great photograph. It represents the vertical lines of the city very well, and creates a lot of visual interest in the many varied, and yet consistently upward forms. I also like the faint glare in the bottom-left of the frame.

The only potential shortcoming of the image is the larger building on the left of the frame, which seems quite dominant as it spans the image from top to bottom. There's obviously not much you can do given the limited framing opportunities to achieve this wonderful parallel composition, so it's more of a shame that the building is there rather than a fault of yours, as it unbalances the composition a little.

There's some subjective notes I could make about exposure, but really they'd be just that: subjective. As it stands, it's a strong image. Well done!

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ryanDUFFIN In reply to FauLTYMOoSe [2010-05-26 04:52:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you thank you, couldn't agree more about the composition.
To the right of the image (in the unseen portion) is another large building, i tried (and managed) to work around that building. I mistakenly forgot to take the remaining structure into consideration. But thank you for the critique.

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FauLTYMOoSe In reply to ryanDUFFIN [2010-05-26 05:00:35 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! It's really a great image

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adotwhite [2010-07-16 17:14:49 +0000 UTC]

sick!!!

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