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Published: 2017-10-04 02:24:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 4
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And here we see the wild gay child in her natural habitat.(c)2017 minicakess
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first i will discuss what i like about this work before becoming an ass
1- i very much like how you have lineart colour
2- the pallet is very sweet and soft and seems calming
3- the lines in the eyebrows i really like, it adds texture
4- the blush is not overpowering and is very nice
5- colour wise this is a very nice piece
6- also your anatomy is correct
but now ill move on on things to improve on
1- your lines are a bit messy, just noticing strange areas of extra width where it looks slightly awkward but not a huge bother
2-your blush overlaps with other aspects of the drawing, like over the eyes and hair
3- this is just a personal preference so you dont have to listen but maybe add some shading.
4- her nose looks a bit strange so adding a line for the nostril would fix it
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Thank you for the critique! I'll try to improve my art a bit.
And honestly I just was lazy and didn't bother shading x'D
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also her neck is thicc af, not forgetting that her arm looks absolutely not proportionate and broken
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Ausquiz Β The arm is just what I usually do with my art, it's something I prefer to do. The neck is thicccccccc because once again it's something I just like to add.
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that's just a twisted ball excuse way to say like all the 13 y/o that "this is your style"
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But it is my style and i can draw however i wish.
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In my art style there are things that have been exaggerated like the eyes and limbs.
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eyes are no deal, if it's a style they don't count because they make the face special
the deal is that specific arm
stop making shit excuses, there are styles with fucked up anatomy that look great.
you won't change my opinion even if you try so just stop
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Just leave, if you don't like my style then just leave my profile.
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I am not even on your profile, I am replying in my reply notification section. You asked for critique (opinions on why it looks bad), you get it.
I was expecting more mature behaviorΒ for someone who asks for critique.
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I'm sorry, I get angered easily.
I should be more mature but it kind of makes me feel bad when you say its not part of my art style. It's meant to be that weird because of my artstyle,
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I didn't say it is not, just improve on it to combine with exaggerated correction for it to look appealing
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K, thanks, and sorry for being a butt.
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