itxyoshi [2018-01-11 01:17:42 +0000 UTC]
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I think this piece is cute and the art in general is very nice but the breasts are too low and one is making the dress go out of proportion, the head is too small in comparison to the body. The eyes are cute but they are too far apart from each other the dress straps also become too small that it kind of makes the piece less natural looking, I think you need to work on anatomy, I recommend you to watch speed paints so that you can study anatomy a bit more, aside from those points this is really cool.Cheers,Yoshi
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saturnart In reply to itxyoshi [2018-01-11 23:02:11 +0000 UTC]
Coming from you I'll take the critique with a grain of salt, but thanks anyway! I'll see where I can improve.
itxyoshi In reply to saturnart [2018-01-12 02:08:26 +0000 UTC]
thanks is a grain of salt good or bad?
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VanillaSymphony [2018-01-12 11:10:09 +0000 UTC]
Mr.Eplipading is clapping in the distance