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Segment200 — VT Fan-Fic: DO YOU WANT TO KNOW MY SECRET? Chpt 20
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Description    CHAPTER 20
Me and the Chief Detective walk to The Smashing Hammer.
The rain pours hard today.
"She probably is trying to coax us so we can fall into Jimmy Casket's trap." Chief Detective said as he hunched his hat over his face and shoved a hand in his pocket and placed the oxygen tank on his back.
"I don't think she would do that"
"Really? She almost KILLED YOU!"
"But, the way she looked at me. Her eyes were filled with tears. She looked like she didn't want to, but Jimmy seamed like he forced her to"
"Sure." He said with a smug look. "Wanted her to look like that"
"Whatever" I say ending the conversation.
We arrive at The Smashing Hammer and we walk into the back alley.
It's dark.
The rain drips into a puddle like if some heavily drunk men saying how they love each other and are brothers, alcohol kids.
Don't do it.
We both have our guns in our hands .
"I really don't like the look of this" The Chief Detective said.
"Neither do I, sweetie" A familiar voice says and walks down the alley with her hands behind her back. "It smells, it's dirty, graffiti on the walls. It's a wreck, Q!"
Juliet.
She walks towards us in a gray hoddie that's smothered and drenched in blood. She pulls her hoodie to reveal her mew rigged short curly brown hair, and the blood smeared on her face, and a grin.
His grin.
"Kids these days" Juliet concludes.
"Juliet" I say.
I want to run to her.
But I won't because something is holding me back.
She smells.
Girl hasn't taken a shower in days.
Besides in blood.
"Quebec." She walks to me slowly and I grip my gun. "I'm-I'm so sorry."
She begins to sob heavily.
I run over to her.
"QUEBEC NO! ARAGUAYA!" The Chief Detective says and I whoosh around.
Jimmy Casket put a knife to his neck and...
Slice.
"NOOOO!"
Juliet throws a knife at me  and I dodge it.
I run towards the street.
Nokomis stands in my way.
"QUEBEC!"
I slam into her.
"You forgot your medica- Wait-Is that a dead body? AAH!"
"RUN!" I grab her hand pull Nokomis up.
We run down the street.
"HELP US!" We shout.
All the people look out on us.
Strange and smug looks.
"THERE'S BEEN A MURDER"
They just blink their eyes.
"JIMMY CASKET!"
They all scream and run in panic.
Nokomis and I see Jimmy and Juliet standing in the middle of the street.
"DO YOU WANT TO OUR SECRET?" They say in sync and pull themselves together to kiss.
They fire their guns into the crowd with their hands stretched.
Nokomis and I slam to the ground.
I wrap my arms around her.
She does too.
"We should go" I tell her.
"Right."
We run into an alley and climb up a fire escape.
Nokomis and I jump into a window.
"¡Fuera de mi casa te arrastras! FUERA! FUERA! FUERA! LLAME AL 911!" A spansish woman said.
"Sorry, Ma'am" i SAID. "We're leaving!"
"¡FUERA! VOY A MATAR USTED! ¡Aléjate de mi mujer!" The spanish husaband said pumping his shotgun.
"ESPERE! Esto es un gran malentendido. Jimmy Casket está disponible! RUN!" Nokomis spoke and then the family zoomed and screamed out.
"You speak Spanish?"
"Aquí y allá" Nokomis smiled at me.
I smiled back.
I look on the floor and see that he dropped his shotgun.
I grab it walk out of the door.
"It's time"
Click.
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Comments: 5

Dakotajohnayers [2014-07-13 19:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Y chief have ta die u butt hole casket

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creepypastafan1002 [2014-05-04 18:01:44 +0000 UTC]

More!!

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Segment200 In reply to creepypastafan1002 [2014-05-07 20:10:46 +0000 UTC]

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creepypastafan1002 In reply to Segment200 [2014-05-08 03:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Seriously is real good

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creepypastafan1002 [2014-04-22 16:14:12 +0000 UTC]

GJ!

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