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Segment200 — VT Fan-Fic: DO YOU WANT TO KNOW MY SECRET? Chpt 4
Published: 2014-02-15 16:45:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1055; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Description           CHAPTER 4
It was coming my way.
I jumped out of the way and landed on the body of Clarrisa.
"AAAAHAAHAHAH" I screamed and jumped up. A pool of her blood was on uniform.
"Oh. My. God" Preston said and drawed his 357.Magum to Jimmy.
But he was already gone.
"Dangit!" He yelled.
"We, we, we could of saved her!" I yelled and turned around to the SWAT team with sniper rifles. "WHY DIDN'T YOU SHOOT? YOU COULD HAVE SAVED HER! WHY?! YOU LET HER DIE!"
The cheif dective turned to me and said: "Q, just get some rest. You need it"
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When i got home my Mother, yup, and shut up, I live with her, she was worried sick.
"QUEBEC! I'm so glad you're okay!" She hugged me tightly.
"I'm okay Ma. "
"Honey, you looked like you've just seen a murder! Are you alright?"
"You're telling me" I grumbled as I sat down.
"Oh, I'm sorry. Did you hear a'bout the plane crash and The WoolsBrooke County Hostpital?"
"I was at both of those. I say and heard people die Ma"  
"Oh sweety. Let me you make some sweet hot chocolate" She walked into the kitchen and prepared the hot chocolate. "I bought some maple trees today, so we can fresh maple leafs!"
"Can't get anyomore candian then that" I mumbled.
I heard a peice of glass break. "AHAHAHAAH!" My mother screached.
"MA?!" I ran in to find my mother okay with a broken mug on the floor. "Are you okay?"
"Yeah. I looked in the cabint and, and" She panted leaning on the wall.
"Lets get you seated, Ma" I sat her down. "What did you see?"
"There was no chocolate mix for the hot chocolate." My eyebrow lowerd and my pulse went down.
"Really? You gave me a heart attack. You know there's a MURDERER on the loose"
"A WHAT?"
"Oh, yea, he's dangerous and I don't want you getting hurt. I've seen what Papa had done to you before, i won't let that happen again. Scream when you are in trouble. For real"
"Quebec, you're going to make a good husband for one of those men at work"
"WHAT?"
"Well, honey I never see you with a lady."
"My partner is a woman"
"Oh, thought that was a man with a woman's name"
"Oh, Ma" I shook my head and laughed. "Let's get to bed. It's late."
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       *Point of Veiw from Jimmy*
"WATCH OUT!" The officer screamed. I grabbed her hair and pulled her up. "NO! DON'T DO I-"
Slice.
"I guess Clarrisa CAN'T explain it all! HA!" I dropped the body and threw the knife staight towards his face.
"SWAT! PUT YOUR HANDS UP!" The SWAT shouted.
Dang.
But I can outrun them.
I jumped from the roof to a recliner that shaded the sun. Then played hopstoch with the others.
"HEY!" They shouted then fired there guns. They where coming down the ladder. I grabbed a metal pipe and smashed it. "Woah, woah, WOAH, WOAH, WOAH, WO-AHHAHAHAHAHAHH!"
Ah. The smell of blood.
Wonderful.
I took there guns and ammo and I ran into the wheat feild.
"I WIN!" I chanted in my mind.
"Why?" Someone in my mind said. "Why? I thought you loved me? Jimmy, don't. Please. PLEASE! I LOVE YOU! DON'T KILL ME! NO! NO! NO! NO! No, no, no, no......." The voice faded out.
"Shut up" I said.
"I'LL GET YOU ANYTHING, JIMMY! PLEASE I BEG OF YOUR MERCY!"
"Shut UP" I said louder.
"NO! NO! NO! NO! STOP! STOP! I LOVE YOU!"
"SHUT UP!!!" I screamed.
"Ahh" She breathed so sudtly. I walked out and set the house on fire.
"GET OUT MY HEAD! STOP! STOP!" I fell to the ground and I panted. "Stop..." I picked my gun up and ran to town.
Familes with kids were walking home. Eldery too. A children's playground. Teenager were making out, then her father spotted them. Then yelled. And they got into an arugement.
Boring.
I'd might as well spice it up.
"HEY!" I yelled. I pulled out my assualt rifle. "What to know my secret?"
Bullets sparyed, cars exploded. Playground cleared.
Ha.
I dueld the assault rifles in my hands. And fired in both directions.
This is going to be a fun night.
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Comments: 5

dragontransformation [2014-07-16 05:24:42 +0000 UTC]

i can only amagine venturians jimmy voice and laugh when i read jimmy fan fics just so hard not to ITS STUCK IN MY HEAD AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! JIMMYS IN MY HEAD! AHAHAHAHA! WANNA KNOW MY SECRET!

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Tojunior [2014-02-15 18:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah nothing like reading about violent murders early in the afternoon...

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GamersArtist [2014-02-15 16:53:58 +0000 UTC]

I like the point of view from Jimmy.Nice addition.

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Segment200 In reply to GamersArtist [2014-02-15 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]

I needed something to freshen it up.

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GamersArtist In reply to Segment200 [2014-02-15 18:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Well good job!

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