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Published: 2011-08-24 13:35:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1975; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 22
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Redline for:If anything is confusing just ask. I didn't go over exact issues because i felt it would be too specific for you, but hopefully the general tips will help??
If you would like me to redline something for you:-Note or leave a comment for me on my page or this drawing with a link to your drawing that's already submitted to the club
-If it's not in the correct me manga folder please tell me which folder it is from so i can submit it to the right one when i do
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This is great. Can you redline my drawing for me? Someone gave some tips but the tutorials for prospective is just too confusing at times due to the angles-
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Thank you.^^
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Can I ask if you've seen this tutorial yet: [link] and if you've clicked the links in the comments for basic perspectives?
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Yes, I clicked on the links and seen it but the more of an angle it is, the more confusing it is ( I was never good at understand prospective. About the one area I hadn't made improvements on. 
Kind of hard to explain, it seemed all over the place really. If it was just one part, probably wouldn't have much of a problem. I think I made it more complicated than I should have. I used to make cubes in class, but never really gone beyond that.
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Well right now you're actually attempting a very basic one-point perspective, you just aren't drawing all your lines to that one point. Do you understand that at least?
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You mean like the vanishing point or one point perspective? I think so. So basically I need to redraw the room first and draw the lines right?
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Well one point perspective refers to there being one vanishing point. You need to make sure all the lines receding need to go towards that point. Notice how the lines on the cabinet are spreading out? They are all going to 3 different points instead of one, which should be the same one as the bed and the walls, etc. Why don't you read the basic tutorial on about.com first and redraw this. Since it's a bit old you might have improved
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Alright, I try it once again and see how it goes (I know the anatomy has improved since than, maybe the perspective has as well).
Thanks.^^
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Great Correction again! Especially the shading give you a great overview over the 3-dimensional body. Well done ;3
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