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shelleypalmer — Summer's child lost
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Published: 2015-09-28 13:08:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 649; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description In the autumn of my years, I resonate to summer’s plight
to relinquish times of playful sun and frou-frou dress of light,
and yield to Fall, majestic in her sombre, mellowed gown,
see the child of my own yesterday, once small, now fully grown.

It’s time I know to feel the passing rush of many years
which come so much more vividly in the reign of Autumn’s tears
See the children play outside and kick the fallen leaves
feel the winter yet to come, beneath the Autumn’s eaves.

I miss the children playing in the summer game now lost,
whipping up shock winter waves from coast to summer coast,
hiding sun one moment and the next revealing rain,
It gives an ache, a yearning for a wisdom I've to gain.

But Autumn sits upon a throne and waves her hand but slow
Long she has been waiting, watching all the children grow
She promises an inner joy and peace for which I yearn
that never could I sadly find in summer’s brightest turn.

I envy not the children now, they’ve had their summer days,
and Autumn is my time to glow and reflect the passing days,
to live in this season’s moment, appreciate the mild,
and keep inside, to hug and hide, my eternal summer child.
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Comments: 9

Supach [2015-09-28 15:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful

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shelleypalmer In reply to Supach [2015-09-28 15:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  I'm not getting much work done today! Thanks for the fave!

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2015-09-28 15:05:31 +0000 UTC]

you´re welcome.

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Zorbonaut [2015-09-28 13:59:06 +0000 UTC]

With summer gone it seems like all the writers on this site turn more melancholic...

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shelleypalmer In reply to Zorbonaut [2015-09-28 14:05:07 +0000 UTC]

I came across a competition for Autumn as I was posting other poems onto various groups  - Since I had already put my September Equinox on to this group I couldn't enter it, so I wrote this one earlier, now I can't remember which group it was.  Otherwise to be honest I don't think I would have indulged in another!

Found it now!  Always losing things! Cant submit till tomorrow.

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Zorbonaut In reply to shelleypalmer [2015-09-29 09:46:33 +0000 UTC]

I see, DA and its writers ae keeping up with the times.

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shelleypalmer In reply to Zorbonaut [2015-09-29 12:59:37 +0000 UTC]

I should think others are more inclined this way.  I'm not always current with regard to news but seasons - well they are mostly weather inclined and we British would lose our main topic of conversation with strangers (not to mention the inspiration!)

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KitsuneDzelda In reply to shelleypalmer [2015-09-28 14:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Shame too, since honestly I think this one is better.

That was quite the poem.  The rhythm and meter was spot on and the content itself was pretty gripping.  You definitely made a connect there with me on this one.  Good show ^^

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shelleypalmer In reply to KitsuneDzelda [2015-09-28 15:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Crumbs, thanks for that!  And for the fave!

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