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Published: 2004-10-23 18:28:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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My heart hurts, and it aches!My legs tremble: the earth quakes,
my heart pounds, and it skips.
My legs roll, and heave like ocean ships.
Slowly I bleed inside; slowly my insides wither and die.
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Comments: 5
i like it.. i really like it. it seems like youre really letting your emotions out.
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you have no idea what this really entails, do you? i can honestly say it's still true to the day. but thanks....
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Wow!! 
One of the best emotional pieces I've ever seen! I like the flow of it all
Altho I think u have got to at least put it in the complete piece section rather than the picture, its just easier for me to read really
I love some of the metaphors and the rhythm
Some of it really describes how I feel sometimes
I don't normally make poems favs but I think this is definatly a keeper!
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thanks! i appreciate it. The whole thing was a way for me to let it all out.
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