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Published: 2008-07-18 01:12:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 554; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Entry for s contest, Dreams and Fantasies.[link]
Stock is: Mountains [link]
Thankyou!
Lady: [link]
Thankyou!
Sky [link] (my own...)
I'm new at this, I would appreciate some advice:3
And I really don't feel that I'm finished with this...
Looks fake. Haha.I was planning to make a drawing, but I didn't have time
I like this anyway. When the contest it over, I might correct the flaws
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Work on your blending. Try doing some light erasing around the hair and left shoulder. That should help blend it a bit.
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Ok, thanks for the advice
But that sort of "white line" around the shoulder and hair is painted, because I thought it would be light there. Difficult to explain, but something like this: [link]
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Is it totally wrong?
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No it's not totally wrong. Just make the outline lighter (maybe put the opacity to 60% or 70%, maybe a bit less), and actually have the outline working as a highlight and not an outline. It should highlight the edges, meaning it should be drawn on top of the clothes and hair, not just outside them. The highlight/outline should also follow the same shape of the object it's drawn on so it till looks like a loose fitting robe or wavy hair. Sorry if you don't understand this. 
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Thankyou SO MUCH for taking your time to explain for me
And I understand what you mean, I will try it when I get the time
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Aww, thankyou
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