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Sori-Eminia — Hiro (CE)
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Published: 2020-04-03 04:45:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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My 2nd entry for this contest by Tachibana-Mizuko . I absolutely adore using watercolors for soft, pastel looks like this!Related content
Comments: 16
Hello there! I am from . I am here to go over the good , what needs work , and some suggestions.
The good:
This is beautiful. You work very well with watercolors from how clean the piece looks. The edges are crisp and clean , yet the work feels soft. i am not sure if it was on purpose but i like the transparent affect of the wings. I like the detailing you added to the clothes and hair. The little flower embroidery on the sleeves and shirt is pleasing and the matching flowers in the hair is a nice touch. I like the thing attached to the belt, feel free to correct me on it. But it reminds me of the tag on a Japanese wind chime. I like that you kept the flowers from the shirt and hair and carried it to the tag as well. its cute. i like that you used layers and color shading as opposed to coloring in one color, it helps to make the piece look softer
Some suggestions:
I do not have much to add but I will suggest this. I wish you added some more depth to the shoes. The heels themselves are fine but with the side direction you drew them in , the sole looks flat and thin compared to the depth you gave the heels. I also wished you added a sort of background to this piece. Nothing elaborate but maybe a ground with some grass would have helped. make the pink and blue pop.the wings seem oddly placed , or is it the shirt that is transparent , please explain this if you can. Lastly , there are some really sharp blacks in here that kinda throw off some of the soft look. Like maybe the eyes could have had pink line work like the rest of the body? The black line work of the silver bracelet is somewhat jarring as well.
Overall:
This is a lovely piece and reminds me of spring, but that may be subjective. your work with the watercolors is especially nice. I adore the soft look you were able to achieve and it is certainly pastel! beautifully done, home this helps.
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Lovely illustration.
Very good work with the use of the color palette in this piece.
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Ah this soft style looks lovely :3 kudos on getting the colors so even too
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