Comments: 18
StellaAumento [2011-10-16 13:06:31 +0000 UTC]
I wondered why nobody is drawing pictures about this, yesterday. I forgot to search some -.-'
I like your picture. It shows what incredible journey Sirius was on.
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elegaer [2006-12-04 09:12:24 +0000 UTC]
oh this is wonderful! I can't comment much on the technical side, I'm afraid, but I love the composition and the idea!
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RedLina [2006-05-02 13:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I love how you made Sirius in the water, it's really realistic. I think you should work a bit on the darkness that surrounds Azkaban, make it more gradient, bacause you made it like a bubble. I know it's supposed to be magically gloomy but I still think you should make it more fluent. And the waves in the foreground are great but since you're working with perspective, you should make them aggressive in the background too, they should um, , decrease in size, not in dynamism... I'm not sure if you understand, I'm terrible at expressing myself... in whatever language
And since you asked about stormy weather, from what I know, correct me if I'm wrong, but I think the line of the horizon should be less distinguishable, and maybe the colour palette darker, but just a bit, not too much or else the contrast between Azkaban's gloom area and the rest of the picture would be lost.
It's a good pic anyway and I'm sure it took a lot to finish, and although I'm hardly a critic, I hope my comments help...
Good luck,
-Lina.
PS: I remembered I've seen a tutorial, not really on storms exactly but I think you can find a few useful tips, here you go, I hope it helps [link]
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silma [2006-04-25 04:32:44 +0000 UTC]
I'm not great at critical comments, so please bear with me esp since i'm really bad at digital art. Um, i like the "pall" over azkaban, it adds menace, but to me it appears quite generalized, if you reduced the size of it, i think it would look more localized over Azkaban and more sinister. ( obviously just my opinion..I'm no art critic - thankfully)
In regards to Waves - the best example of a wave i can think of is by Katsushika Hokusai - The Great Wave Off Kanagawa. I know he did block prints but it's such a great wave. it could help a bit maybe
Um i hope this was the sort of thing you were looking for .. i wish i could've been of more help.
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Rei-a-yuy [2006-04-21 10:24:55 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent! Padfoot looks so cute! <3
The gloomy cloud around Azkaban gives it a real edge, and the white sea spray just adds to the roughness of the scene.
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