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Coupdeplume [2010-10-26 15:06:20 +0000 UTC]
This is so perfectly beautiful and tragic. The repetitive wording makes it easy to see how the days blend and get lost when you lose someone special.. Amazing job.
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liltreede [2010-10-24 21:19:57 +0000 UTC]
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autumleaf826 [2010-10-24 21:15:21 +0000 UTC]
awww at 1st i culd only c tha 1st part thtz so so so so so so sad
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Absolfreak [2010-10-24 21:10:51 +0000 UTC]
awww how beautiful!!!
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lovesoranges [2010-09-28 02:57:09 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful and powerful!!
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simongirl [2010-09-24 22:46:27 +0000 UTC]
Just stunning
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BillysticZiploc [2010-09-24 12:03:50 +0000 UTC]
beautiful
and sad! great work
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animelove30 [2010-09-24 05:59:16 +0000 UTC]
awww.... I totally relate!!
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AlayAmay [2010-09-24 01:57:08 +0000 UTC]
This is really touching. I love it.
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Caffeinated-Wisdom [2010-09-23 19:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, this is just so beautiful.
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millert [2010-09-22 23:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Lovely work. ;(
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ZeraZombie [2010-09-20 07:21:02 +0000 UTC]
D:
<3
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BatCup [2010-09-20 00:45:54 +0000 UTC]
Very strong. In fact, I have a character in my story that died on her wedding day. This expresses that same emotion. Very nice.
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LivingAFantasy [2010-09-18 23:19:01 +0000 UTC]
This is a great poem... I love the way the words conveyed so much emotion...
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KGameLover1 [2010-09-17 21:13:16 +0000 UTC]
WAAAOOOWWW!!! Great!! I LOVE IT!
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fangurls101 [2010-09-17 01:02:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. that's.. deep.
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PabloPastulio [2010-09-15 13:44:19 +0000 UTC]
great piece dude! it flows nicely!
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Raivere-chan [2010-09-13 20:42:27 +0000 UTC]
Really well thought out and touching! <3
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Essenique-Arts [2010-09-13 20:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Very powerful and full of emotion! I like how you lead up to where you can tell it's going to be something sad and then all the sudden he's being buried! I wasn't expecting that! Great job!
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EccentricArrow [2010-09-13 20:09:33 +0000 UTC]
beautiful but depressing.....
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ll-Hidden-ll [2010-09-12 18:30:10 +0000 UTC]
he dies!!! T>T
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dreamer97 [2010-09-12 02:41:25 +0000 UTC]
very lovely <3
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DmitraBlue [2010-09-11 20:42:39 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous!
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unknownvizard [2010-09-11 20:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful and sad, I love it
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lovelife99 [2010-09-11 19:58:17 +0000 UTC]
So touching... *sniffle*
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leocale [2010-09-10 23:16:31 +0000 UTC]
beautiful!
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Monofilament-NS [2010-09-10 01:48:36 +0000 UTC]
That is such magnetic lines; emotionally provoking. Well done!
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GreendayIllusions [2010-09-10 01:33:00 +0000 UTC]
wow, i wish tat i could right like yew, i honour yew!
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Areina-chan [2010-09-10 01:14:22 +0000 UTC]
that was sad but really good
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Chivi-chan [2010-09-09 06:47:25 +0000 UTC]
This poem is very sad. ):
I love this.
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DreamCreator77 [2010-09-09 01:25:47 +0000 UTC]
i loved this poem.
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katie0607kitty [2010-09-07 23:19:40 +0000 UTC]
I really love this <3
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ArcaneAngel0711 [2010-09-06 16:28:32 +0000 UTC]
beautiful..simply wonderful
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