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Published: 2018-10-25 14:08:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 4844; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 35
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Description * Updated on Jan 4, 2022 replaced several panels and comic stylize *

I have completely renewed my old story : Horror On The Moon (Full Story 1 : updated)

The story is revised by mrhungry56.deviantart.com.
I sincerely thank him of his cooperation.

I added the prologue of the basic story, and mrhungry56.deviantart.com revised it.

next:   Horror On The Moon (Full Story 2 : renewed)

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(Prologue)

At the TDF (Terrestrial Defense Force) Moon Base, somebody was operating a curious controller box.

'JOLT!'

Suddenly, the huge iron-made buildings of the Base became misshapen.

The person responsible was Alien Zamppa, the alien who once intended to invade the earth but was annihilated by TDF's commander Kurata and Ultra Garrison's commander Kiriyama.

"Hahaha.. This 'Telekinetic Remote Controller' is excellent! It can control any object.. including Ultrawoman H's body!"

Alien Zamppa commanded Petero, a loose skinned monster, to release a furious sandstorm towards the buildings of the Base.

The buildings were completely shrouded in the thick sandstorms. 

"Hahaha! With this controller, and monster Petero, I can beat TDF.. and Ultrawoman H."

Alien Zamppa laughed.


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Ultra Garrison suddenly lost contact with TDF Moon Base, commander Kiriyama and officer Dan Moroboshi were sent to investigate the Moon Base.

From TDF Space Station, commander Kurata and officer Shirahama were heading for the moon.

Shirahama held a curious controller box.. he actually was Alien Zamppa!

As they hovered over the coordinates of the Moon Base, they were horrified to see the huge Base had been reduced to a pile of sand.

Grief stricken, they were further shocked when a member of Ultra Garrison suddenly transformed into Alien Zamppa! Trapped aboard their ship, the remaining members of Ultra Garrison were about to be killed by the alien.


At the same time on Earth, Hiroe detected the peril unfolding on the moon.

"Shuwatch!"

Hiroe transformed into Ultrawoman H and teleported to the moon to confront Alien Zamppa.

"Ah! Ultrawoman H!?"

Alien Zamppa was surprised as UWH suddenly appeared in front of him, then he changed his attitude.

"Hahahaha...Ultrawoman H! You are like a moth flying into the flame," Alien Zamppa laughed.

Then, a flabby and tubby monster appeared behind of Zamppa. It was monster Petero!

"Petero! Beat Ultrawoman H!"

He ordered Monster Petero into action.

'Shaaaa!'

Petero released a furious sandstorm at UWH. She lept to the side to avoid the stream of sand. Then the sandstream struck a huge rock near UWH, turning it into a lump of sand in an instant!

"Oh! This sandstorm turns objects into grains of sand! What a terrible weapon.."
UWH murmured as she looked at the pile of sand.

"UWH! You will also be turned into sand! Go ahead, Petero!"

'Shaaaa!'

Petero fired several treacherous sandstorms at UWH, but she managed to evade the sequence of violent sand streams.

It was just the moment when UWH recovered and attempted to shoot Specium Ray.

"Eat it, Ultrawoman H!"
Alien Zamppa turned on the switch of the Telekinetic Remote Controller.

'JOLT!'

"Hum?  What's happened!?"

UWH felt a slight shock moments before she realized what had happened to her.

"Hmph!  Mmmm... I...I can't move!"

Petero noticed his enemy suddenly became motionless, slowly approached in front of UWH.
And finally he fired the furious sandstorm at the helpless heroine!

'Shaaaaaaaaa...'

It lasted more than 30 seconds, completely shrouding her in the thick sandstorms.
As the fog of sand cleared, UWH gradually became visible. She was completely coated and stood as a silent sand statue!

"Ah! UWH has been turned into a sand doll!?"

Ultra Garrison was shocked at the sight.

"Hahahaha! It serves you right, Ultrawoman H! Collapse into sand!"
Alien Zamppa laughed triumphantly.

(To be continued)

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Old version :  Horror On The Moon (Full Story 1 : updated)
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Comments: 31

typewriter17 [2022-01-04 09:52:55 +0000 UTC]

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2022-01-04 11:54:04 +0000 UTC]

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typewriter17 In reply to sudo5348 [2022-01-04 12:19:45 +0000 UTC]

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2022-01-04 13:19:48 +0000 UTC]

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jaredjalick [2020-01-21 16:41:38 +0000 UTC]

I would love to see her collapse into sand.

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sudo5348 In reply to jaredjalick [2020-01-21 19:49:50 +0000 UTC]

In part 2, you can see (just as an imagination of the villain).

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typewriter17 [2020-01-21 10:59:22 +0000 UTC]

ack!  You always pick the best darn spots "To Be Continued." 


Great story.  It sure looks like a lot of work.

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2020-01-21 12:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you amigo!

Your cliffhanger stories are much more amazing than mine! ^^

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typewriter17 In reply to sudo5348 [2020-01-21 12:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Or at least longer. 


Your stories are highly enjoyable.  It's nice to see Hiroe as Hiroe sometimes, too.

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CX500TC [2018-10-26 11:08:09 +0000 UTC]

 

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sudo5348 In reply to CX500TC [2018-10-26 12:10:38 +0000 UTC]

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typewriter17 [2018-10-26 09:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Reruns already?  LOL...  Nice re-telling.

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2018-10-26 10:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Re-telling is sometimes an amusement.

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OakEgg [2018-10-26 01:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Those 'SHA's' are pretty cool. Hopefully UWH doesn't end as a 'sandwich'
Great posing and action here too

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sudo5348 In reply to OakEgg [2018-10-26 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you, but unfortunately UWH is already sandwich

mrhungry revised me, his literature is really great   

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OakEgg In reply to sudo5348 [2018-10-27 16:04:07 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. Oh! I want a UWH sandwich with bacon and cheese

Yes what to do without him

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sudo5348 In reply to OakEgg [2018-10-27 19:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Bacon & cheese sandwich is tasty!   

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OakEgg In reply to sudo5348 [2018-10-27 21:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely and with UWH too it's a real 5 star meal

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sudo5348 In reply to OakEgg [2018-10-27 21:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Let's cerebrate    mrhungry's Birthday with UWH sandwich!    

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OakEgg In reply to sudo5348 [2018-10-28 14:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like a plan. I'm sure that there can come some nice steaks from that rump 

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sudo5348 In reply to OakEgg [2018-10-28 19:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yummy! yum yum!!

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typewriter17 [2018-10-25 17:52:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh noooo!!!  Will we have to start calling UWH "Sandy?"


Heh heh.  Fantastic sequence.  Very absorging

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2018-10-25 19:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you for giving her a charming nickname, pal!   

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typewriter17 In reply to sudo5348 [2018-10-25 20:32:02 +0000 UTC]

lol... It seemed sooo fitting...

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sudo5348 In reply to typewriter17 [2018-10-25 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe..

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SiBaTheHat [2018-10-25 17:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Bit of a waste if she did.

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sudo5348 In reply to SiBaTheHat [2018-10-25 19:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Waste of knickers, and.. 

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SiBaTheHat In reply to sudo5348 [2018-10-25 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]

...contents.

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sudo5348 In reply to SiBaTheHat [2018-10-25 22:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Oops!

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ImaginDevan [2018-10-25 14:33:11 +0000 UTC]

She can win!

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sudo5348 In reply to ImaginDevan [2018-10-25 14:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Eventually!

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