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Supach — If my tears could bring you back
Published: 2018-01-31 23:47:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 838; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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If tears could bring you back to me
Then we´d be back to when we met.
We´d have another chance to be,
This time the very best.
But all the tears I´ve cried and cried
Haven´t done me any good,
This love we share will be forever,
I am sure that´s understood.
I know you´re in a better place
And you can rest in peace
But I´m still here in this evil world,
Who knows what´ll happen to me.
You never liked to see me cry
So that´s why you played the clown
And always tried to cheer me up
When I was feeling down.
My tears they have to dry my love,
I´ll stop being this broken mess.
So I´ll do what I know you would want so much,
For me to choose happiness.

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Comments: 40

IRIS-KUPP [2018-02-10 19:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Your tears show how strong your love is. Passion is in your poetry.  

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Supach In reply to IRIS-KUPP [2018-02-10 20:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Iris  

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ChuJu-loves-Zuko [2018-02-09 13:33:32 +0000 UTC]

this is bringing tears to my eyes

at least you have the love of your friends

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Supach In reply to ChuJu-loves-Zuko [2018-02-09 16:03:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you Beth

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ChuJu-loves-Zuko In reply to Supach [2018-02-09 17:33:48 +0000 UTC]

anytime, Suzanne

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shelleypalmer [2018-02-05 16:34:38 +0000 UTC]

If crying brings a little relief then I'm sure he won't mind. I think rather that he would see you without the sadness. At least you don't hold it all back. Suppressing the feelings and becoming numb might be worse but each poem you write, though sad is a tribute and maybe just gives a little comfort - I hope so anyway. I see it is four years now. I think he would be proud of you with this website, the way you express things and reach out to others. It is something positive that comes from a sad event.

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2018-02-05 19:48:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you Shelley I´d like to think he is proud of me, he did like my painting and drawing very much when he was here, so it would be nice if he liked my writings too, infact sometimes I think it´s him talking through my poems, some how guiding me along and ofcourse if they are able to help anyone going through the same sorrows then that would be wonderful. Thank you for your lovely comment

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shelleypalmer In reply to Supach [2018-02-06 15:48:52 +0000 UTC]

It really does help when someone has gone through the same thing, it's just knowing you are not alone having specific feelings and experiences and feeling that you are not being singled out by Life to have them! Yes he may well having some input in your poems. With some of my stuff I feel an influence from somewhere else, especially when I write after a tragic or major event.

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2018-02-06 16:48:24 +0000 UTC]

 

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vanndra [2018-02-02 23:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Suzanne

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Supach In reply to vanndra [2018-02-03 07:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Ann  

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vanndra In reply to Supach [2018-02-03 08:03:18 +0000 UTC]

You''re very welcome

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LoonaLucy [2018-02-02 13:36:02 +0000 UTC]

   

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Supach In reply to LoonaLucy [2018-02-02 13:44:25 +0000 UTC]

 Thank you.

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Alena-48 [2018-02-02 09:50:05 +0000 UTC]

This poem is heartfelt.
I wish you success in everything. 

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Supach In reply to Alena-48 [2018-02-02 09:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear Alena  

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Alena-48 In reply to Supach [2018-02-02 09:57:52 +0000 UTC]

 

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silentsketcher97 [2018-02-02 04:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Such a nice and sweet poem about love. He is always with you  

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Supach In reply to silentsketcher97 [2018-02-02 08:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank  you so much  

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Lugia20711 [2018-02-01 19:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written. 

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Supach In reply to Lugia20711 [2018-02-01 20:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend  

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Lugia20711 In reply to Supach [2018-02-01 20:32:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Luna-the-Zekrom [2018-02-01 15:13:57 +0000 UTC]

This poem is so heartfelt and moving.  I also think it's inspirational to people who have gone through a similar experience.  You've captured the feeling of grief so well in your words.  Thank you for sharing this.    

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Supach In reply to Luna-the-Zekrom [2018-02-01 16:03:54 +0000 UTC]

  It warms my heart   to think I am helping someone who might be going through the same situation  

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Luna-the-Zekrom In reply to Supach [2018-02-02 20:00:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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LadyPleiades [2018-02-01 14:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Glad you choose happiness.

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Supach In reply to LadyPleiades [2018-02-01 16:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Trish, I know he wouldn´t want to see me so upset anymore

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DanielaIvanova [2018-02-01 13:35:04 +0000 UTC]

This is so heart-breaking to read. And yet I'm sure it still pales compared to what you must be feeling. I'm really sorry for your loss.

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Supach In reply to DanielaIvanova [2018-02-01 13:42:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you, yes I have discovered that grief is  something you never get passed but have to learn to live with. So although my husband´s loss is ever present, even now 4 years on, I can cope better with the sadness  

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DanielaIvanova In reply to Supach [2018-02-01 14:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Very well said. I'm glad you have found ways to live with the grief.

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ArwynRie [2018-02-01 12:36:15 +0000 UTC]

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Supach In reply to ArwynRie [2018-02-01 13:00:47 +0000 UTC]

 Thanks Steph  

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Maria-Schreuders [2018-02-01 10:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic written, I hope you can found a way to life on with happiness  big hug 

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Supach In reply to Maria-Schreuders [2018-02-01 12:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Maria, it´s been a little over four years now and they´ve not been easy, I am slowly learning to adapt to life without him 

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Maria-Schreuders In reply to Supach [2018-02-01 15:29:41 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome dear Suzanne, I can understand that, it is hard life   

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SeldomSimone [2018-02-01 05:59:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry for your loss you'll survive don't worry^_^

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Supach In reply to SeldomSimone [2018-02-01 06:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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xDonnervogelx [2018-01-31 23:50:47 +0000 UTC]

So much love speaking out of this poem. Thanks for sharing it to us all (=

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Supach In reply to xDonnervogelx [2018-01-31 23:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Joana  

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xDonnervogelx In reply to Supach [2018-02-01 00:13:38 +0000 UTC]

 

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