meic2 [2003-10-06 21:05:47 +0000 UTC]

I can't help but like this .... great minds ? [link]

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livingbyair [2003-09-28 17:21:32 +0000 UTC]

delightful. The title is why i read this and it certainly stood up for itself.

good work.

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tragicrabbit [2003-09-28 16:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Standing at the shoreline
With the salt wind in your sea hair
You slung stones that skimmed in silence
On the surface of my heart.

i like it. it's short, but it gets to the point quickly, and your imagery is wonderful.

"with the salt wind in your sea hair" - i think this is your strongest line.. but that's just me. the whole thing is beautiful.

- brittany

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benevolentsoul [2003-09-26 09:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Standing at the shoreline
With the salt wind in your sea hair
You slung stones that skimmed in silence
On the surface of my heart.

Is this about baby Jesus?

I don't know how I feel about it... I guess I don't really feel much of anything. Sorry, feels like an empty North Carolina trip to me...

devoid of beach trips...

- Keegan

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corruptedangel [2003-09-23 18:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, superb! Do i have to give you another !?!?? No, not this time. Because i dont like the message.. yet i love the poem! Great work again. A very nice concept and I do so adore shorties!

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soulwrai [2003-09-23 01:37:46 +0000 UTC]

short but good powerful image and feeling

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ton-dieu-noir [2003-09-23 01:26:08 +0000 UTC]

it's beautiful .... simply wonderful.....

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princepoo [2003-09-23 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]

don't put down your own work.

let us do that

anyways, i like it's simple but deep [ha, get it?] image.

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