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Published: 2005-09-21 17:03:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2515; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 166
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Description Heh.. I did say I was going to do some more of these guys. They're loads of fun to design and I've been practicing with their anatomical structure a bit (during my Art History class, no less) to get a feel for them So here's two more Hyksis, to form a kind of sideplot to the main story involving Mwai, Lae and Loosestrife.

Goldenlarch at the top there is one of Loosestrife's dals, recently acquired when he violently and unceremoniously stole her, along with several other dals, from her father's herd. She was only an adolescent at the time, and the entire incident traumatised her badly, leaving her generally fearful, weak-willed and submissive. Now pregnant, she fears for herself as well as her unborn kyfaw.

Alder is one of Loosestrife's sons (gasp). Soon after he was born his mother grew ill and weak, being a rather old dal, and as Alder was a buck, Loosestrife drove them both away from the herd. Alder's mother passed away that winter, but while she was alive she taught her son all she knew about survival, which the young buck put to good use. Now he is almost full grown, and though a naturally peaceable beast, he still carries a chip on his shoulder from how Loosestrife treated both him and his mother, and is undecided as to what he should do about it.

Goldie's markings were pretty much made up, though her creamy-sandy-gold colouring was based on the rare Saiga Antelope. Alder's colourscheme and markings were drawn almost exactly from the Roan Antelope, though of course those markings on his flank came from me

Goldenlarch and Alder © Shelley L.
Hyksi species © 
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Comments: 59

swift-whippet In reply to ??? [2008-03-08 01:21:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. This is an old picture of my hyksis though, and my style's evolved quite a bit since then.

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scifipegasusart [2006-11-24 03:44:34 +0000 UTC]

I love these characters, I have to fav all your ref sheets x)

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swift-whippet In reply to scifipegasusart [2006-11-24 03:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, aww. thank you! I'm glad that you like them

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WhiskerWing [2006-10-05 19:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Wheee, scroll to the bottom.

Mmkay, I have questionthings for you!

I've got a pair in mind (a dal and a buck, half brother and sister -- she's a season older than he) I don't want to reveal TOO much till I get to do a nice picture of them, but I'm thinking they'll also be kicked out of Strife's herd (the buck for obvious reasons).

Can I know a little more about Alder? Would he be the type to take these two in (possibly) and they make the beginnings of a herd? (Loose won't want the dal, for a specific reason which I shall not yet reveal to you muahahahaha)

Characters are much less fun without a storyline to place them in. =]

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2006-10-05 23:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Characters are much less fun without a storyline to place them in. =]

-wholeheartedly agrees- ^^

About Alder.. I'm still figuring his personality out, but I'm thinking he won't really be too mature emotionally at the time my story occurs. He'll be pretty tough from living in the wild by himself, but I'm thinking that because of his life in isolation he'll lack social skills xD Still, he won't be a bastard. And he's not autistic or anything, so I'm sure he'll figure stuff out Maybe your two could be his introduction to dealing with other Hyksis, since I'm sure he'd sympathise with their situation to some degree having been booted out of Loose's herd himself! note me if anything

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WhiskerWing In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-06 00:48:17 +0000 UTC]

How old is he when the story goes down?

Meadowsweet and Dandelion (DON'T call him Dandy or he'll bite you) are both fairly young, and I was thinking Sweety may develop a crush for young Alder. Sweety's one season older than Dandy, they're half brother and sister, and she leaves when he gets kicked out at weaning time, and he had a really rough time while he was in the herd.

Which brings me to my other question -- is it okay if I snag Strife's characteristic back-strip for Dandy? I love genetics, and I like my own special brand where I get to pass markings down. =] Also, the fact that he resembles Strife so closely gives him some extra angst while he's a weanling, which helps my intended story. If you'd rather I choose something a little less blatantly "Strife" let me know, I don't have a problem coming up with an alternate route to where I want to go. =] (Dandy's gonna be a different color scheme than Strife though, probably grays, so in colored pics they won't look the same).

I think I'll post my prelminary sketch sheets for them so that you and Opal can look them over and suggest changes and whatnot. =]

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2006-10-06 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm not altogether sure how Hyksis age. But My and I have talked about antlers before, at the very least, and I think he'd be in his early twenties in human years. Just finished growing, but still young yet. hmm.. maybe I should post that drawing I did for My some time back that was my take on how Hyksi antlers work o.o she was still figuring them out at the time and I was helping her xD

Oh, please, do! It's not really like I have any copyright on specific markings of his anyway, and if you put your own spin on it that would be cooler ^^ Dandelion and Sweety sound so awesome already, I can't wait to see what you do with them!

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WhiskerWing In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-06 02:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm *ponderponder* How long do they take to wean? (If I remember correctly, Strife kicks out the young bucks at weaning)

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2006-10-06 02:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Still need to figure that out o.O all this is complex and a lot to compile. It's why I haven't properly worked out any of their ages yet.. I'll be talking it over with Mytola herself.

Alder was kicked out much younger though because his mother was too old and slow to keep up with the herd, and they were both left behind.

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WhiskerWing In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-06 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]

*nodnod* This actually may require some shifts in my planned storyline to make it work. I'll see if I can snag Skye on tomorrow for MSN -- will you be on, do you think?

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2006-10-06 02:31:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm more often on AIM than MSN when I'm in the States. We can give it a shot! What time is it for you now, and what time would you guys be on tomorrow?

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WhiskerWing In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-06 02:33:35 +0000 UTC]

It's 9:32 pm for me now, and I'll be on probably around 7:00am tomorrow, through 3pm (unless my work blocks the link, that is. )

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2006-10-06 02:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, so you're an hour behind me then. I'll see if I can be on at 8 then! yay. haha.

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WhiskerWing In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-06 12:20:51 +0000 UTC]

<3 Yay! We can try to compile a list of questions to ask Skye. =]

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Queen-of-Greyhounds [2006-10-01 21:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Those are cool. They remind me of jackalopes. :3

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swift-whippet In reply to Queen-of-Greyhounds [2006-10-01 21:54:57 +0000 UTC]

-LOLs-

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poothos [2006-09-30 21:51:52 +0000 UTC]

I love these critters so much D: I think Alder should beat Falsestrife up. heehee. >>;

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swift-whippet In reply to poothos [2006-09-30 23:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Hee, I think maybe he will someday! Thankyoooou for all your lovely commentings :3

You should check out *OpalSkye and make some of your own! hees. -> [link] [link]

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poothos In reply to swift-whippet [2006-10-02 17:06:33 +0000 UTC]

I did check her out, but I dun think I could make such a chara... and stick to 'em, or make 'em a coolnice story. >>; I'm like. boringstupid. ahh.

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Dalmatinka [2006-05-16 16:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, and great designs!
Also a very interesting species!

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mollziki [2005-10-06 19:13:06 +0000 UTC]

groovy!

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angelsynn [2005-09-24 00:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Your doing really good with the drawings. The characters seem interesting.

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WhiskerWing [2005-09-22 16:17:49 +0000 UTC]

I am really loving this species, they are amazing. You're doing a fantastic job illustrating them, too!

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swift-whippet In reply to WhiskerWing [2005-09-22 19:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you ^^ I love the species too, is why I draw them so much xDD

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blayrd [2005-09-22 11:25:16 +0000 UTC]

These are rather outstanding character designs, had to drop a comment Love the markings and how everything flows together, entire thing is gorgeous.

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Sanura91 [2005-09-22 08:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Why must you always make such prettyfuls characters ;~; I want to draw them all, but cannot for I do not have the time... nor that much inspiration )= But keep up the great work and keep those wonderful characters coming x3

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swift-whippet In reply to Sanura91 [2005-09-22 20:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I know how you feel.. there's a million and one characters on dA that I'd like to try my hand at drawing x3 but thank you, I'm glad you like my character designs so much. I have fun doing them

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shani-hyena [2005-09-22 05:40:11 +0000 UTC]

i can't help but think of Cainotherium when i see these guys x.x especially the female because the prehistoric critter didn't have horns X3 your poses and anatomy are perfect! do you really think you need more practice?

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swift-whippet In reply to shani-hyena [2005-09-22 20:16:00 +0000 UTC]

That's interesting! I should go and research more on prehistoric mammals..

Eh, I don't upload the bad drawings Thanks!

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shani-hyena In reply to swift-whippet [2005-09-23 01:12:30 +0000 UTC]

prehistoric animals is one of my obsessions and i don't upload my especially gruesome pics either

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jennama [2005-09-22 03:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, I really like the design of Goldenlarch, the colour choice is very appropriate, she looks so cute and the ears are awesome! I want one as a pet! Nice pic

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liljailhouse [2005-09-22 02:41:09 +0000 UTC]

their are sooooooooooooooooo cute

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Bear-hybrid [2005-09-22 02:24:32 +0000 UTC]

nwee absoloutely amazing designs yet again swift ^^

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VanillaKitsune [2005-09-22 00:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome 8D

I love the designs,especially the one at the bottom .o.

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Cheesefulness [2005-09-21 23:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Great characters!! I especially like Alder's coloring. It's nice that you made a story to go along with both of them I can't wait to see more of your characters!

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swift-whippet In reply to Cheesefulness [2005-09-21 23:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Eh, part of the credit should go to *OpalSkye for inspiring me with her wonderful world But thank you!

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Cheesefulness In reply to swift-whippet [2005-09-22 00:15:47 +0000 UTC]

no problem, Swifty! Btw, just wondering, how's your animation class going??

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swift-whippet In reply to Cheesefulness [2005-09-23 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Animation class.. is fun! I got to do a pendulum last monday. And a cat blinking and putting his ears back. w00t. xD But I'm a lot more confident about my animating skills now A lot of my friends are complaining about the workload in general but I'm enjoying myself :3 The way I see it, that's how you get better, no? hah. How's things on your side? *is still waiting for more prehistoric mammal coolness o.o*

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silverroseblue [2005-09-21 20:24:50 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome! I love their designs...and the anatomy is perfect!

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WindChimeDog [2005-09-21 18:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Poor Goldenlarch... She's so pretty. And Alder looks sweet as well. ^^

What a cool species! I'll have to check out Opalskye's gallery. =3

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swift-whippet In reply to WindChimeDog [2005-09-21 18:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Ooh yes, please do! I think she'd love you for it She's amazing at what she does.

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buger157294 [2005-09-21 18:25:04 +0000 UTC]

hey swifty... I love your art... I lov this piccy... Keep up the gewd work!!!

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swift-whippet In reply to buger157294 [2005-09-21 21:20:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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buger157294 In reply to swift-whippet [2005-09-21 21:35:12 +0000 UTC]

You r welcome!!

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Chazar [2005-09-21 17:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Huh! O.O'' That is awsome! Wery good work! I like colloring... i love it... wery goos... Wih..

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OpalSkye [2005-09-21 17:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Gah! Darn it woman will ya let me catch up?!

EDIBLE!
I seriously love Goldenlarch...shes beautiful. *cries* Darn it all...I'm all inspired again. *shakes head* Will these guys ever leave me! She carries the Rabbit element a lot further than the bucks can. Which is really great, I was worried that the whole, lettace muncher aspect was getting lost, but nope, its right there at the front I do love her Damsel story line, we need a little fear in this here world. Also...plans for a comic strip? The ol' brains been bubbling over how best to get across how Mytola found Mwezikuu and such....all crutial. *kicks butt into gear*The backing stories are very good, I like that touch, your very good at that....darn your talentedness...

I definately love the feet, that element is perfection, the claw/hooves being like toes, that fits with a weasel hand/paw, very interesting. I do like that part now. Much happiness.

These two are cute in comparison to ol' Loosie...he got one or 5 screws a tad on the wobbly side.

*pride* oh babe. They just look SO good. Uberness, your like...my MUSE!

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swift-whippet In reply to OpalSkye [2005-09-21 18:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Heh, sorreh. You know how it is when inspiration strikes you

Personally, I hope they never do. This world just gets better and better with each thing I discover about it!
I wanted to try drawing a dal for a change, and since I like drawing and designing more feminine characters, I decided to make a dal character. And too many of my old characters were the spunky heroine types (if my younger self were designing these I think she would have been all "Grr I hate Loosestrife he killed my father and destroyed my home REVENGE!"), so I thought it might be an interesting change to do a weaker character. I just feel so sorry for her. I didn't put it in the description in so many words but I'm sure you can imagine that the process by which she got with kyfaw wasn't really a pleasant one.

OMGAH. That would be AWESOME! Again, especially if everyone's stories were involved.. plus it'd be a great way to get your story across, to dA especially. I'm even getting visions of it being a large-scale thing with several issues chronicling Mytola's story, Mwai and Lae's, even the Fearaki History as a kind of prequel.. but eh. My imagination always runs ahead of my logic anyways.. if you do need help with it I'd be glad to, though I don't want to commit to any non-school projects besides my own right now since I'm paranoid about not being able to finish things later in the year.

Ah yes.. I'm glad I got the psychopathic part of Loosestrife's character across. I'm starting to discover that he's a tad insane.

And aww, that's probably one of the sweetest things you've ever said to me! But if I can inspire you to create what you've been creating thus far then I'm happy

Whew. I should probably take a break from this universe for a while and go work on my own

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OpalSkye In reply to swift-whippet [2005-09-21 19:31:30 +0000 UTC]

ol' Juniper (the much referenced not yet created Hyksis) is being coloured...ish as I type.

Yeah...I got that info without reading it. Dark but credible twist. Everything thats not so perfect about these guys makes them better, the beauty of both species being that, no matter which side your on, you cant help but love/hate them. Fearaki appeal to the furry/wolf peeps while the Hyksis appeal to say, the Equine crowd.

Heroine. What a good name! Cannabis!! Oh thats my next on

I'm trying to gather that info. I think I got all the Fearaki stuffs together, I need to write part of the story to actually get to find what the missing pieces are. Like, you dont know what you need till its needed?
I think I'll start by illustrating the Fearaki History bit. There are eras to consider and a lot of research into the geographical locale, which is the biggest issue. Then theres the hellish topic of Backgrounds! ARGH!!
I know what you mean, I tend to get carried away with it all, and then forget what the heck is going on here IRL. LOL what a fangirl

Loosecannonstrife. Hes mental. I love him. Hes like...Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer. but before he fell for Buffy! *lol* Thats just crazy. *chuckles*

No worries. Its true!

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swift-whippet In reply to OpalSkye [2005-09-21 22:02:26 +0000 UTC]

*wants to see*

Yeah, I've always thought that was a good thing, that there's no 'good' and 'evil' side, though you have the Fearaki pretty much as the protagonists here. And yes.. I didn't really notice that! That's a nice twist really since everyone here seems to be one or the other. I've always noticed that the number of comments seem to be higher when it's a wolf or a horse I've posted. o.O

Eh. Maybe I'll make a Tobacco. xD

Aw, that's the fun part! The research I mean. It can be really interesting and stimulating to go around looking for things that might enrich your story. But I feel your pain over backgrounds.. I'm trying to improve mine. I'm terrible at landscapes though I think I'm improving through practice. I'm sure you could too! I'd love to see this comic when you're done with it or help with it! I'd probably like to do Mwai and Lae's part in comic form, though I think I could only start that after I get a better feel for the setting

Loosestrife's the first character of mine I love to hate.. it's interesting really

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OpalSkye In reply to swift-whippet [2005-09-22 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Crazy huh? Slave yer butt off for something that gets hardly any recognition....such is the murder of online communities

Tobacco! *lol* I rather like that name.

I kinda feel like its fate, when the character I had in mind matches up with a name that I like and there is at least one fact about that plant/name that brings the character to life. Its great.

Hes sex.

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