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Published: 2010-08-14 22:14:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 11036; Favourites: 205; Downloads: 71
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8D It's not sunday for most of you, but for me. So I'm submitting it. I just couldn't wait any longer.
Finally, different characters. This site now introducing Dayhawk and Nighteye. Also, before you say anything about Nighteyes eyes, they are meant to be like that. He is not blind, he just has very light sklera, iris and pupil. That gave him his name.
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Ich hab grad mal wieder die Seiten durchgelesen und grad gesehen... zwei Posten unter mir ist noch ein Kommi, dass du verstecken kannst x').
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Yeah, der Typ hat unter so einiges Seiten immer das gleiche gepostet. Ich wundere mich grad ob ich den geblockt habe. Sollte ich evtl tun.
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Ich glaube, ich hatte den auf der Group-Page schon geblockt. Auf meiner Site war er auch, dasselbe in GrΓΌn x'). Manche Leute haben echt kein Hobby.
So lange nach der DD hat sich die Situation denke ich beruhigt, aber so lange man das Kommi sieht ist es so ne Art Schleichwerbung fΓΌr den und das muss ja net sein x'D. Gut dass du's unter den anderen Seiten anscheinend schon versteckt hast :/.
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*laughs* I got to this page and went "Nuuuuuuuuuuu, I want moooooooar! D:" xD How fun, I can't wait to read the rest ^_^
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Die Seite lieΓ mich grinsend zurΓΌck. Ich liebe es einfach, wie ihr dem Leser die Stimmung ΓΌbermitteln kΓΆnnt, die ihr auf der Seite dargestellt habt!
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dayhawk sounds like the kind of guy you want to be with when on patrowl. or is it a case of all showe and no trousers.
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XD Well, he is only a year old, so that might not be such a good idea to go with him on patrols.
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Haha, really excited about getting that one out, huh? I love Dayhawk's expressions there, every one of them are fantastic.
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8D I was SOOO tempted to submit alreay last week. I really like how this page turned out.
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The 2nd panel is made of absolute love. Love love love. Also, I adore Nighteye's eyes. Also, your backgrounds!
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Rofl... picking up Lex' line from one page before: here we have... the scouts. They haven't lost their touch since they never had it XD.
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XD rofl. That is so true.
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And I bet they'll get themselves into trouble somehow
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8D I think that is totally out of the question. They smell like trouble from miles away.
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can I ask how you make the speechbubbles?
I think you work with photoshop like me... but in my comic I cant find a way to add thos clear outline to the speechbubbles
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The speechbubbles are made in white with lowered opacity. TO make the outlines not fade together with the speechbubles, I copy the speechbubbles layer, change the color from white to a midgrey (#808080 exactly!) because this grey will be invisible as soon as you change the layermode to overlay. Then I can add the black border with the function (Stroke). The black is not effected by the overlay mode.
If anything is still unclear I can try to make some screenshots so I can ecplain it better.
Oh and I work with PS CS3
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oh yeah screenshot would be nice^^ I dont understand THAT much english x)
(and if you dont want to fill your gallery with the screenshot send it to my email^^ flying_werwolf@hotmail.de)
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Hope that explains it.
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NP. ^^ I make a quick little quide for you.
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very nice! But can I critique something? In your fourth panel you have that whitish blue outline on the bottom part of nighteye. Shouldn't it be ontop of nighteye. Like down the back and what not...the moon is above them..not below so the light should be on their backs. o.O Dayhawk is perfect though. Sorry...just kinda threw me off >.<
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It's reflected light from the surroundings. I know it shouldn't be so strong, although it is supposed to be a very light night with a fullmoon, but I made it so people could better see the chars, especially Nighteye, who nearly blends into the background with his dark colors.
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I love how the panels are over the final one and blend in it's just so cool
amazing posing and expressions, also love the coloring and shading
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Thanks. ^^ With each page my coloring and shading seems to become more complex. I need to be careful or it will soon take me more then two weeks to color a page. XD
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lol yes you will cuz fans may come after you XD
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I can see Nighteye's pupils!
Dayhawk looks amazing though!
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Ah, I'm glad then. I was afraid people couldn't really see his pupils and misread it as if he is blind or something.
I totally dig Dayhawks design. He's awesome.
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My guess is if the problem continues, then maybe try to darken the pupils a teeny bit. 
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HAY THERE SEXY DAYHAWK
/drools
Nighteye reminds me of a hyena. And I love him/her. xD -clings to-
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XD That is most likely because of my failanatomy. THe frontview of Nighteye in the last panel looks weird. But he really does give me trouble all the time when I draw him. Dayhawk is so much easier, dunno why.
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Haha, your anatomy is so much better than mine xD
owo Well, he looks absolutely amazing in the last panel there. xD I think I found my new favorite character. -huggles Nighteye-
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