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Published: 2012-05-21 16:16:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1055; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 12
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Shota, shota, night feeveer... /shotEntry for 's contest and my brand new OC, Evan.
Name: Evan
Age : 14
Personality : He's a "yandere" (a Japanese term for a person who is initially very loving and gentle to someone before their devotion becomes destructive in nature, often through violence).
As for the design, I tried to make it interesting yet easy to draw. The small dots are the color scheme I chose for him. And the frontal view of the staff is there for... uh... *shrug*
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Comments: 17
Wow this look just like a concept , you truly are a pro u know
I love his custom & weapon , the hair style is lovely too You sure had good sense of color , i can tell which kind of element he use just by look at the custom color
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Thank you! Actually it was the metal/earth thingy idea that came after the color, didn't think about the story until after I finished the design
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My pleasure dear
Really , i think it turn out so good
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Great job on the textures and perspective and shadow :3
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I like the staff. It kind of looks like one of those metal garden sculptures, which is kind of cool, in a wu xia weaponry sort of way.
As for the overall design, I'm really getting a FFTA kind of vibe here, which isn't a bad thing at all, but is something you should consider in the future.
The main gripe I have with this drawing is not anything design oriented, but the way that your character is standing. As it is now, his posture looks rather unbalanced, almost to the point that he seems to be about to fall backwards. Give the positioning of his staff and his head, perhaps you meant for this to be an upwards view of your character, but the positioning of his feet and knees are not pointed up in the same manner, (as well as being pointed inward in a strange way,) so this perspective is kind of lost. I suggest reading a few tutorials on posture and the center of balance such as this one: [link]
Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for the feedback! I wish I knew what a FFTA vibe is... And about the posture... he is supposed to look as if he is about to fall backwards.I guess I should have emphasized it more. Once again, thank you for the time you took commenting! It's much appreciated!
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Oops, sorry, I shouldn't have assumed you knew. FFTA is short for Final Fantasy Tactics Advance. You should check out some of the concept art if you get a chance.
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Ooh, FF games! Woah, that's quite a compliment then! 
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