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Published: 2018-07-19 14:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 671; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 8
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Description If you're considering trying to sneak a peak under her skirt, then it's already to late for you to try dodging the slashes from Rumble Stilts' serrated blades.

So Umber wins this spar ^_~

Finally after quite a bit of experimentation Umber is ready for IRAY renders
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Comments: 18

GLoRToR [2018-07-19 14:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Not trying to be mean here.

1. Vision - For upskirt ecchi, it's very unclear. The pose and those huge weapons cover too much of the character too. I like the idea of the distraction in combat but I'm pretty sure the opponent wouldn't even be sure what he's seeing because of all the obstruction factor.

2. Originality. I like the character, like that it wants to kick ass and does it in a teasing way. Never seen a shield with a built-in chainsaw either so that's a huge plus.

3. Technique. I've been looking at Daz a lot lately and I'm sorry, this is not one of the better renders I've seen the past week.

4. Impact. Very little. I mean, I do like the idea but it's just not coming through. Probably a difficult thing to pull off anyway.

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teturo In reply to GLoRToR [2018-07-19 14:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough, thank you for the feedback

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GLoRToR In reply to teturo [2018-07-19 14:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Happy to help sorry if it seemed harsh

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teturo In reply to GLoRToR [2018-07-19 15:11:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm still only just learning to use IRAY so I'm happy with the results so far, but I'm well aware they are far from perfect.

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GLoRToR In reply to teturo [2018-07-19 15:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Composition is also an issue with that image in my opinion. The pose is not clear. Like if you make it into a silhouette you can't tell what's happening on the pic.

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teturo In reply to GLoRToR [2018-07-19 16:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Why would you make it into a silhouette?

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GLoRToR In reply to teturo [2018-07-19 17:16:55 +0000 UTC]

That's how you check whether your figure composition is clear or not. Make it into a black shadow. If you can tell what the character is doing, your pose is strong. If not, it's weak.

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teturo In reply to GLoRToR [2018-07-19 17:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, I had not heard of that before but I’ll keep it in mind.Β 

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GLoRToR In reply to teturo [2018-07-19 17:27:00 +0000 UTC]

The more you know about art the better your overall performance will be even if you just set up renders. Watch a few vids and tutorials about compositionΒ 

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Seridan [2018-07-20 20:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Dangerous indeedΒ Β 

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teturo In reply to Seridan [2018-07-21 03:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye kindly ^_~

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DeadCobra [2018-07-20 10:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Shes so pretty

Well made

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teturo In reply to DeadCobra [2018-07-20 12:14:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly ^_^

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shnoogums5060 [2018-07-19 21:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Not to worry, i won't even bother peeking underneath her skirt.

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teturo In reply to shnoogums5060 [2018-07-20 00:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Then you’re strong enough to avoid her distraction ^_~

Thanks for the support my friend ^_^

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shnoogums5060 In reply to teturo [2018-07-20 00:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah.

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Match25 [2018-07-19 19:38:00 +0000 UTC]

I would personally say a lovely view

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teturo In reply to Match25 [2018-07-20 00:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya ^_~

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