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Published: 2007-08-18 16:33:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 11601; Favourites: 210; Downloads: 318
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Description The moon reflected beautifully in the tiny pond. This was where she picked Forget-me-not's, he remembered. It was where they trained. Where they laughed; away from the prying of the others. This was where their hands had touched, their shoulders brushed. This was where they daydreamed, the sweet smell of Red Oak seducing them into light sleep.

It was a gorgous spot, full of some of the fondest memories Zuko had ever had. And, now he found, that it was surely the place he fell in love. It was a peaceful sancuary, not a single ill moment had befallen it. It was NOT the place Azula and her friends had attacked. It was NOT the place stained red with gore. It was NOT the place Katara had been stabbed by jealous Mai's daggers.
But it WAS the place he brought her. Because, perhaps if she lay in the water, she would heal. Perhaps if her bending had come back, she could wash out the poison. Perhaps, the reason her heart had stopped was because.....

A breeze blew, cooling the hot tear that rolled down his cheek, and forever ruining the peaceful spot as it fell to Katara's face, making the dryed blood run.
And he hadn't ever said it. Hadn't ever really tried, thinking that he would have tomarrow, and the next day, and the next. Zuko kneeled, cradeling the waterbender closer as if to pass her a heartbeat. Her fingers dipped into the water, but any soft glowing was left up to the moon, not the girl's cold hand. Burying his face in her hair, her bloodsoaked hair, Zuko took in her scent, much dulled due to the lack of body heat. He gazed at her face; her nose, eyes, lips. He had never gotten to kiss her. Never gotten to see how differently she tasted from Jin and Mai. Gently, he leaned his head down and pressed his cut lips aganist hers, the metalic tang of blood creating another tear that dropped into her locks; lost.

Into her ear, he breathed out an apology. Across her cheeks he kissed his forgiveness.
He had never gotten to say it. Never spoken, "I love you".
And what was worse, he cried, the saltly water escaping from his eyes.....
He had never gotten to say goodbye.

Alrite, so me being a sucker for the "Katara gets fatally wounded/dies so Zuko becomes enraged/devestated" fics, I figured I needed some in my gallery. Well, I already have one [link] but They're so fun to do, I couldn't resist another. ^ ^ Shame on me.
The story is from a one-shot I wrote, called "Sancuary"....which should be obvious from the picture title. Like it? Hate it? Gotta Love it? Tell meh!
I know Katara seems...not fully there...but it's because she's curled up agianst him- her head is practically resting on her knees. Zuko can't stand for her to dangle bridal style.
I have not forgotten about any requests, I am just lazy! But I'll get them done, don't worry!

Zutara will be canon!!!
ZUTARA FOREVER!!!!
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Comments: 113

thecrunchyblueberry In reply to ??? [2011-05-13 01:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, it's supposed to be a tear running down Zuko's cheek, but I can see why you would be confused. Unless you mean the bottom right corner panel, in which case it is meant to be a tear splashing down onto the face of a very dead Katara, to which I can *also* see why you would be confused! Thanks!

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nmfinney [2010-11-26 06:28:45 +0000 UTC]

I love the back story!!! Where can I read your story?

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unicorn6110 [2010-08-27 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! I think I see it: is the triangle Zuzu crying and the rectangle the tear landing on Katara's.... destroed face HOW COULD YOU!!! Poor Kaka...

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unicorn6110 [2010-08-27 23:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Lurve it. THE FIC IS SOME OF THE BEST I'VE SEEN! But what the heck is the triangle at the top and the random rectangle at the right bottem-ish?!?!

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VrisKCa244 [2009-12-28 01:58:31 +0000 UTC]

sad.
beautiful.
intense.
JUST INSANLEY AWESOME!!
nice job.

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somerandomteenager [2009-05-14 01:24:19 +0000 UTC]

I love your description, great piece!

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Vexic929 [2009-04-11 01:47:57 +0000 UTC]

so so sad but so beautifully done! *tear*

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B6L6U6E [2009-04-01 23:29:36 +0000 UTC]

*tear* That's so sad! T_T But great.

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Clepuff [2008-10-28 00:55:13 +0000 UTC]

........................
That.
Was.
Freakin.
Amazing.

Deff the best writing i have eer read. more?

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Absolutely-Jade [2008-03-05 03:56:11 +0000 UTC]

did little bunny foo foo kill katara? cause he sure could've, with that big hammer of his.

But then zuko woulda killed him with his fiery flamio-ness.

1 serial killer down, about 5, 000 more to go!

Go get 'em, zuko!

If you have no idea what im talking about, just look here--> then you'll understand.

later, yall!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to Absolutely-Jade [2008-03-14 14:10:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no Foo foo is innocent here. He did however have something to do with the tragic death of Lu ten.

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Absolutely-Jade In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2008-03-14 19:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Poor Lu Ten! Murdered due to blunt force trauma to the head, and the CSI's can't trace the prints...

thaz cause Foo Foo has no finger prints!

*gasp*

tee hee

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to Absolutely-Jade [2008-03-16 15:36:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes! Bad, bad Foo Foo!

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Absolutely-Jade In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2008-03-16 21:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey crunchyblueberry, i luv your sig!

way cool.

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to Absolutely-Jade [2008-03-22 00:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Really? Why thank yew. Yours is funneh. It makes meh GIGGLE!!

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Absolutely-Jade In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2008-03-23 23:18:27 +0000 UTC]

urs too! Of course they exist fool!

very funny. makes me giggles.

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BulmaOojo [2007-12-05 03:31:11 +0000 UTC]

My friend is @ an Evanescence concert letting me hear "My Immortal" as I look @ your pic. I'm gonna cry! Beautiful pic n story!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to BulmaOojo [2007-12-08 16:47:26 +0000 UTC]

that sounds fun(and very emotional)!That would definately add the sad mood to it! I hope you have tissues. Thanks!

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Maahiyum [2007-11-02 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]

thats a beautifully written story, and I'm not one for the dramatic sad endings

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to Maahiyum [2007-11-02 21:09:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm with you....they're just fun to write.

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zutarasgirl [2007-10-07 15:50:54 +0000 UTC]

so sad zutara will happen this season and i mean it they are so cute together

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to zutarasgirl [2007-10-07 16:35:39 +0000 UTC]

I know they will.

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Ginny0291 [2007-10-04 10:16:53 +0000 UTC]

haha.. nice one..

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Ginny0291 [2007-10-02 08:27:56 +0000 UTC]

wow.. i actually teared up while reading accompanying story..

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Supersonic-Gabi In reply to Ginny0291 [2007-11-18 07:17:26 +0000 UTC]

so did I poor Zuzu!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to Ginny0291 [2007-10-03 21:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Score!

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2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-15 02:57:04 +0000 UTC]

it's so sad but i love it! i know it sounds weird but i hope one of the two dies,perferably katara because zuko would go into a rage and kill his dad. also, i LOVE drama.

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-15 06:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow...I don't think I've ever heard a Zutarain say THAT before. 0.0
I love drama too. In shows. In romantic shows. I have way too much at school. Real drama can suck (but it makes your life much more interesting).

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-19 02:17:21 +0000 UTC]

it's THAT weird?i think it makes sense.

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-21 20:49:34 +0000 UTC]

I guess it kind of does....hmm. Something to ponder....

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-24 02:02:45 +0000 UTC]

cool! it would be awesome,did ya see s3?

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-25 20:58:17 +0000 UTC]

YESSSSSSSSS!!!

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-28 02:37:52 +0000 UTC]

you can see the full episode of the headband on turbo nick and it hasn't even aired yet!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-29 00:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Really?! To Turbo Nick- away!

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-29 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]

haha! ya know that fan fic you mentioned in the authoirs notes,is it the one that goes to chapter 9?if so then when will chapter 10 be up?

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-29 02:57:36 +0000 UTC]

No, that's "Stars". Chapter 10 should be up sometime in October or November (sorry for such a long wait! I'm a lazy ass writer! Gomen!).

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-29 03:04:01 +0000 UTC]

then wich one where you talkin'bout?

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-09-29 03:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Sanctuary is the oneshot I wrote on the AN. :3 Sorry if that was confusing!

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-29 17:41:13 +0000 UTC]

you should make more of it! it's really good!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to 2avatarobsessed2name [2007-10-04 20:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I just might. Someday.....

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2avatarobsessed2name In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-11-03 19:40:02 +0000 UTC]

seriously1 i'm dying to read it!

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sasusaku12 [2007-09-03 19:23:44 +0000 UTC]

You're awesome. fave!!!!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to sasusaku12 [2007-09-03 19:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Huggies!!!!!

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canadiane-sweetheart [2007-09-02 23:41:48 +0000 UTC]

*sniff* its soooo sad, yet so wonderful. I love it so much. Great job with the fanfic, but the drawing was kinda confusing, but who cares

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to canadiane-sweetheart [2007-09-03 20:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I live off tears! (Wait....no.)
I can understand that.

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avatarfreak2 [2007-08-31 00:32:39 +0000 UTC]

heart-braking and brilliant! So is the story! The pic's beautiful!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to avatarfreak2 [2007-09-02 05:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Despite the fact that you spelled the first word wrong, I thank you! Sad scenarios's are so fun to write/draw.

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avatarfreak2 In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-02 13:07:18 +0000 UTC]

oh, it's heart breaking. Yeah. I knew something was wrong with that!

It's a beautiful pic, but I just hope it doesn't come to life in season 3!

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thecrunchyblueberry In reply to avatarfreak2 [2007-09-03 19:52:21 +0000 UTC]

They wouldn't kill Katara!

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avatarfreak2 In reply to thecrunchyblueberry [2007-09-03 23:23:56 +0000 UTC]

I certainly hope not.

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