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Published: 2009-08-29 21:33:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1682; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Another one in the series - Gluttony. As much as I hate her left arm, I can't do anything about it
Reference taken from [link]
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very well done on this drawing, don't worry it looks good just needed a little bit of light, nice work on the expression!
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Wow, this is beautiful! I love her eyes the most. The expression in them are incredible. Beautiful work Renu!
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Thankyou so much sweetie
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I love the eyes and colors! I think both arms do look a little off. I think its mainly the dark shading on the right arm(her right, our left) I think with all the vibrant colors, dark shading doesnt mix well...in this one anyway. Kind of reminds me of this drawing, I did a lot of vibrant colors then made her face extremely dark shaded> [link] was one time it didnt mix well for me
...I think not having that arm there at all might have worked, though you cant change it now I suppose. 
what sins do you have left now? 
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Yes, I think it is the shape & the position of the arm too along with the dark shading. I tried to erase that arm too using photoshop & it looked way better without it, but I didn't feel like cheating those who see it
I'm only left with vanity & anger. In the beginning, I did one after another sin but now it is really becoming a project to complete even 2 more. I feel really tempted to leave it midway & work on something else, but I know if I do another traditional one in this time, I'd end up leaving these ones.
Thankyou so much hun for appreciating my work
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well if you want to draw something else first, I'd say do that. You dont want to force yourself to finish the sins. Though you're working pretty damn fast on them!
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You're welcome sweetheart. Love and Hugs...Pam
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Gorgeous! The orange really sets this piece off, the eyes are incredible!
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You're very welcome!
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I think this one come out great, just the her left arm is weird, should be clearer, I think.
I love the eyes and eyebrows, and this colour is beautiful. I think the hair is beautiful, but hairline is weird, should be more delicate, I think
What materials did you use in this drawing?
sorry my english
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I used my charcoal material use can see in this tutorial by me [link] & pastels for orange. I might want to try to fix the flaws. Thankyou so much hun
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The arms fine, but the lollipop looks a little strange, like it's not round :s It doesn't matter though, I love the strong yellow colour here and her expression
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