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DrNottadoctor [2016-11-18 22:19:32 +0000 UTC]
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This art piece is visual proof of how aesthetics can drag down an interesting idea. When browsing through countless Gmod artwork, one typically sees a lot of the same thing. There will be a multitude of scenes depicting video game characters, combat, fandoms, or the usual Gmod randomness. This piece, however, focuses on a historical figure, which I can appreciate as it provides potential for something genuinely intriguing. Now, I understand the limitations of the software used to make this, but choosing what is most likely a TF2 model does not complement the tone of the art. One must remember that while art is based around ideas, we as an audience are only left with what we can see. That being said, there is not much to observe. The character model representing Jacobsen has an inherently comical appearance, with disproportionate hands that seem too large for his body. Given that his hands are the only part of him that are visible, this does not help the overall image. His face is not shown, and I can understand why, but the amount of it that remains in view causes confusion as to what I'm supposed to be looking at. The first time I looked at this, I thought it was about a priest wearing a scarf over his mouth with a tan hat casting a shadow over his eyes. After inspecting it for a little while, I realized that what I had perceived as a hat was actually his chin. This piece is not a bad concept, but the execution could be much better.
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tigerfaceswe In reply to DrNottadoctor [2016-11-18 22:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly for your critique.
I completely understand the idea of why it's problematic using a TF2-model for a picture about an historical subject. Reason is though due to the fact that there aren't many models out there that are customizable enough for such themes as historical depictions, especially not for time eras as the 17th century. This was therefor a necessity. If I could though I'd totally use a much more fitting model while still being customizable. The hands especially are a problem, therefor.
I totally agree though that I should have covered the face even more than I did. Especially due to the fact that we do not know what Sthen Jacobsen looked like.
That is pretty much my only defense for the picture. I am over all glad that you apreciated the concept though since my main intention was to tell the story of Sthen Jacobsen and his life.
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IBRXGmod [2016-11-18 15:42:47 +0000 UTC]
I must say, your story writing about the character is amazing.
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tigerfaceswe In reply to IBRXGmod [2016-11-18 15:52:54 +0000 UTC]
It's not a character though, but a real historical person who lived during the 17th century. I myself have read his chronicle over the Scanian War (1675-1679) when I wrote my bachelor assignment.
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IBRXGmod In reply to tigerfaceswe [2016-11-18 17:01:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I'm captivated with history.
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Molly-Golly [2016-11-18 15:32:28 +0000 UTC]
wow nicely done i like the position of the camera and blurred areas ... pretty interesting guy
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tigerfaceswe In reply to Molly-Golly [2016-11-18 15:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, mate. Keep in mind though that this was a real historical figure.
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