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Description deep within, there is always beauty

Victoria, B.C.
Beacon Hill Park.

[edit] the border, as per fenrir3rd's critique. I think you were right...
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Comments: 19

kkart [2007-10-09 12:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Just flat out wonderful!

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tinia In reply to kkart [2007-10-09 16:26:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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kkart In reply to tinia [2007-10-09 16:46:23 +0000 UTC]

anytime!

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fenrir3rd [2007-10-08 20:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Ok... this is going to be a very weird critique.

The thing i like the least though is the border...

All of the other images you've had in this set had a black border which in my mind kind of drew you into the image, it grabbed your attention and added emphasis.

The white border has almost the opposite effect, it almost competes with the image and instead of feeling like I'm being absorbed into the picture i feel like I'm being expelled.

Which is kind of an ironic feeling given the Title for the image which to me represents a secretive almost clandestine sort of moment...

It's almost too loud for the feel of the piece.

If that doesn't make any sense I apologize...

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tinia In reply to fenrir3rd [2007-10-09 02:09:38 +0000 UTC]

that makes complete sense, and i was wondering myself whether i liked the white border or not. I will try it out with black and see if it is more enticing rather than repelling.
Thank you *hugs* I love honesty.

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fenrir3rd In reply to tinia [2007-10-09 04:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Looking beyond the border, I could speak volumes on the two trees within the picture. Very thought provoking... Almost poetic. The whole series could tell a story...

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tinia In reply to fenrir3rd [2007-10-17 03:14:13 +0000 UTC]

updated what do you think?

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fenrir3rd In reply to tinia [2007-10-17 19:36:51 +0000 UTC]

The darker framing changes the ambiance, It matches the feeling of the picture more I think.

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tinia In reply to fenrir3rd [2007-10-18 16:28:45 +0000 UTC]

I think i agree. I also asked some friends on a different photo forum - i asked them to compare the two different borders side by side, and everyone agreed on the black.
thank you for your constructive words I am glad i listened.

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fenrir3rd In reply to tinia [2007-10-18 21:33:16 +0000 UTC]

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stranj [2007-10-08 05:01:49 +0000 UTC]

nice!

lol! i was there last weekend before i got on the clipper.

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tinia In reply to stranj [2007-10-08 06:47:33 +0000 UTC]

haha it is a pretty popular spot of the park, though - to tell you the truth - it was my first time being there, and seeing it this way.
I have lived here for 2.5 years

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m3tal [2007-10-06 23:55:41 +0000 UTC]

I love the colours, what area of Beacon Hill was this?

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tinia In reply to m3tal [2007-10-07 02:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Near the fountain (near the petting zoo - across and to the left) haha

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Quetzal82 [2007-10-06 22:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Very nice composition! Once I have my new camera I'll go to some belgian forrests if I have time. Thanks for reminding me

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tinia In reply to Quetzal82 [2007-10-07 02:36:05 +0000 UTC]

aww i love belgium, i would totally love to see how their forests look!
I am glad you were reminded!

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Masterhand33 [2007-10-06 18:18:27 +0000 UTC]

wow!

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tinia In reply to Masterhand33 [2007-10-07 02:34:32 +0000 UTC]

hehehe !

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Masterhand33 In reply to tinia [2007-10-07 05:09:48 +0000 UTC]

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