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Tirius99 — Sinon in Sunset Closeup
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Published: 2016-08-27 05:20:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1250; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 4
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Thank you everyone who commented on the previous Sinon in Sunset picture. The suggestions and critiques really helped when I revisited the original to fix some of my mistakes. One of the big issue was the eyes and I went back in there to try to fix it. Upon looking at it the eyes were definitely too big and round. Too much blue and not enough white so I tried fixing it. The other issue was not enough layers in the hair for the shading so I tried adding a few layers of shading. The stars didn't light up and too blurry so I tried to make them a little more distinct. It still hasn't sparkled but that's my lack of experience and technique know how. Things I haven't fixed but was suggested was the hand. It's a known issue and I'll definitely will work on that also there was the critique that the neck was too thick as well and I didn't fix that yet. Sorry about that but I might revisit this drawing in the future once I've accumulated more experience in drawing. Thank you again for all your critiques and suggestions. Hopefully I made Sinon look a little better than before.Related content
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Light blur is hard to use, I usually made it as cel shading first and then add glow blur. It's maybe a using all entire of her with background color for compensate her color. Black line art is need elaborate one. You can choose between perfect black line art or change color of line art. For this pose, the position eyes is in the same angle of reference of the eye ball.
I made very rough sketch. I made some fix like change the right hand and eye position. oh I didn't adjust proportion. My head is too a little big ^^
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Have a nice day ^^
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Thank you so much for the rough sketch! I like how even with the light sketch you were able to make the character feel alive. I still don't know how to draw well enough to make it look like a statue.
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aww I'm sorry it's so rough >< Thank you. Your art is very good >< You can do it ><
I'm looking forward to ><
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wow! you've done quite a bit of work to improve this! i rather like how you changed the shading, it's definitely an improvement. while her hands still look a little strange, its probably because of the difficult angle. while the stars do look a little blurry, thats ok- stars arent always going to be noticeable. she looks pretty great.
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Ah, I see a great improvement. The eyes look much better, they're slightly off center still but it's less noticable.
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Very nice! you definitely have improved it,
maybe not much but noticeable to people
who commented earlier. Good luck in the
future! i hope these small tiny tips we
gave will make a bigger different in a couple
of months, weeks, days maybe even
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