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Published: 2013-07-24 12:26:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1013; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 38
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Something I have been doing for a while now. Trying out new things I have learned.What i mainly focused on was values and composition. I guess it turned out OK.
I'll be drawing some anime stuff for now.
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"The Sound of Music" is blaring in my mind right now as I look at this-and that's a good thing.
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She looks beautiful, lovely coloring, I like how you did her hair
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Thanks! If there is something bothering you in this picture, you can give me critique if you want. 
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Hmm well, the only thing that "bothers" me is that in contrast to her whole face (the eyes are really nicely defined) her nose seems too blurred for my liking, I don't mean the part between her eyes, but the tip of the nose. It looks quite fine in the bigger picture (when you download), but maybe you could have used slightly darker shades for the nose tip shadows and painted it more sharply.
It kinda also looks like the sky is empty, I think there should have been more details (birds, clouds, and so on) or it should have been completely empty, because it may be that it's the birds (being only in that location) making the sky look empty XD
I also forgot to mention that I really like the perspective of her pose, the mountains are painted really pretty too, the details of her clothing may be slightly too blurred on the skirt, but overall looks very nice
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Really good points!Β Gotta try to make changes to the painting.Β
Thank you for the critique. 
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No problem, I'm glad to help
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