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Toxic-Mario — Luna's Apology
Published: 2011-10-27 17:32:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 96519; Favourites: 1287; Downloads: 1579
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Thanks for the EQD feature guys.
Appreciate it! LOL and some of you need to chiiiiiill with the hate comments. It's suppose to be a fun comic afterall that's why I draw them..for fun. A little on the meh side but this time I was focusing more on improving the art than getting out a messy comic. 
Yeah this should have been out Wednesday but I actually went a little crazy with this comic and I like it much much better now. Easily one of my more favorite ones I've done.
Well guys it's another comic...or comic time. IDK whatever you wanna call it. So yeah this was an idea that spawned OBVIOUSLY from the new Luna episode. I really haven't seen a explosion of Luna comics yet. Some are funny and other...well they are alright...but don't make a lot of sense.
As you know I like going with comic that make sense...or could actually happen in the spirit of the show. So yeah I decided to do a comic as if Luna and Rainbow Dash met up so Luna could apologize to her for scaring her at the end of the episode. IDK...just something I would think Luna could do. I know she has that softer side to her underneath her more stronger personality.
So yeah....ummm as usual, I stuck with the original style of the show. I am really surprised I'm one of the few that stick to the original everything....I just like being consistent...but I still love art that is in other MLP style. I just choose to draw in the same show's style. So that's all I got on this guy. Really hope you enjoyed it. The livestream on this was probably the most fun 3 days I've ever had so far. Especially with the MLP music dual livestream and myself were doing.
So yeah onto more MLP stuff....and comic. YAY! Comments guys?Time spent: 17 hours over 4 days
Program: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking me. Remember to link this back to me if you put this comic on a site or something.
Princess Luna, Rainbow Dash© Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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Comments: 401
thanks for this. I like this critique a lot. Most I agree with a little I don't but I respect your opinin on those. 
I can agree with most of this...this comic as you said in the last sentence was never suppse to wow anyone but I wanted something that is related to the show. I love making MLP comics that COULD happen in the show. Thanks!
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Just small. "I'm looking at the show, there are no significant examples of the artist style in the character designs or background." You could say my art style is nearly able to replicate the show.
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XD...still everything else about it I appreciate a lot!
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I tried to be fare and balanced.
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you know this is my first critique ever
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I'm not much of an artist but I am however a comic enthusiast, a fan of MLP and a writer. Thus I won't bother critiquing the art aspect. It's good, looks kind of like it does on the show but hundreds of people on DA are capable of doing that, I don't give points for it anymore.
Notice I said 'kind of', I might be more impressed if you had done it perfectly but this just doesn't fit that description. Most noticeably Rainbow's snout looks a bit off, and her mane doesn't follow the proper alignment. Her eyelashes curl in this comic when RD is notable for having completely straight eyelashes.
The issue I find is that it's not interesting... at all. It's just two ponies having a casual conversation. Nothing funny happens, nothing entertaining happens in any way, whatsoever.
Seriously who writes a comic where one character goes up to another, apologizes, apology is accepted and that's the end of it. It's boring.
Honestly trying to mimic the show is admirable but when you don't do it write your work just comes off as rather weak. I'd recommend bouncing your ideas off of someone else before sitting down to draw. Preferably somebody who won't just smile and tell you what you want to hear, somebody with some actual backbone who's willing to tell you if your idea isn't all that good.
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I understand wher your coming from...I never said the show's style I draw is 100% perfect. Also it's not like every comic I do is suppose to be perfect....I do drawings for fun....if they seem off at times then so be it. But I do them for fun and i'm happy by that.
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Your motivation for drawing does nothing to affect my opinion of your work. If you're happy with it then good for you but doing it for fun is no reason to produce sub-par comics. Always strive for perfection if you're doing something you love.
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oh I know but there are comics at times that aren't good. Everyone has a few...this was just one of my few. Trust me...I have a MUCH better comic coming up next.
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Oh we'll see. Let me know when it's ready, I'm looking forward to it.
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IF I can finish it tonight it will be out tomorrow.
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Now, why couldn't the actual episode have ended like this? It's a much more satisfying and heartwarming ending than what canon gave us. I love how your comic looked as though it was made out of actual scenes from the show since you mimicked its art style perfectly. The premise is nice and I love cute friendship moments like this since that's what MLP is really all about at the end of the day. You should have written Luna Eclipsed just based on this picture. Great work! -TheGoldenYoshichu
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Very sweet ^^
I like how you kept it to the show too.
(No creepypasta related jokes, random pairings, etc.)
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Little moments like these are always really nice. ^_^
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RainbowDash look realy good in Shadowbolt Unicorm, how sad that Luna wont make her own Shadowbolt wing.
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Wait, Luna is apologizing to Rainbow Dash? It should be the other way around. Rainbow Dash was pranking many more ponies than Luna, and when Luna did it to Dash, she totally deserved it!
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Very nice
I was wondering if you could give this picture by Madmax a look, and see the comment I made under it. Its a sweet non-shipping Luna and Rainbow Dash skit I made when I saw this picture.
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I loved how Rainbow Dash got a taste of her own medicine that night. XD
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