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ToxicSkullie027 — My Tail Mouth! Callilaya!
Published: 2012-08-31 04:47:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1116; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Made with deviantART muroYAY! My Tail Mouth! Callilaya! I love her! She is awesome! Thank u Spectrum! I got her as a custom! I love her! She is amazing! But her tail is male btw!
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Art (c) Me! AND MAI TABLET!
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first off, there are waaay to many sparkle dogs on deviantart. but thats just me. the colors dont match at all realy, and ita a bit blinding. i would suggest using more natural colors to make it look more realistic/natural. and how can the animal be a girl, and the tail be a boy? it deosant make sens. and the nets on the leg, they are not ushualy used on animals. the legs are realy skinny and the heads a bit too round, and the ear looks like ats half cut off. it shouldent attach to the hair like that. but the back looks good. and the way the colors on the fur is (spots and stripes and the skull) the main body of the animal looks like its not realy furry/fluffy. and the tail should have more fur on it.
~Stream
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I think the colors don't fit, they seem to clash together. They are bright, and not appealing. The tail doesn't make since, how can a tail mouth be called a boy or a girl? when they're attached to the body, of a female or male body. It'd be a girl, because it's a girl. Also, the skull doesn't match either, neither do the fish nets. What's with the green/red on the tail? uhhh..I don't see anywhere on the body, where there's green tailing off to the tail? work on your anatomy as well, the hair doesn't attach the ear like that. And your body is okay, the legs are to skinny. But I have to give you credit, you did this on muro. But I hope you can improve in the future.
I really hope you don't take offense to this, or get hurt by it. You DID ask for a critique, but I would love to see your improvement in the future.
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I love the bright colors and the cat like eyes. The tail is kinda creepy X3. Not really lol. Like the spots and skull and colors.
You made a lot of colors on this and I hope this help you because all of this comes from the heart! I like the purple because my fav. color is purple...Nice leggings too. I can't tell if the Tail is dead XD. But nice at add all the wonderful colors together maybe even mixing them. I like how she looks about 10% out of 100% gothic (Because all the black it looks like it's emoish)
I like in the bangs the colors go on top of each other. I hope this helps! Your like a sister to me!
~Love~
SekitaLuna
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this critique is rely unfair. your not rely doing anything but sugar coating it. how you said it was goth/emo can be offensive to people. just because it has black on it does not mean its emo... the colors are to bright and deviantart is loaded with enough sparkle dogs as it is, and gives many people bad names and reputations.
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Nice. I hate how they think you stole what I said, oh well. xD
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No i am not and you copied everything the other person said
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No I did not. I was simply stating the truth
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She was probably agreeing with me, that doesn't mean she's taking it from me. Everything I say, isn't copy righted. Lol.
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This is insulting, I like how you sugar coated it as well.
The colors do not go together, they clash to much. And they blind people's eyes. The nets, are fish nets. Usually, those aren't used on animals. Black isn't emo-ish, either. Nice stereotype.
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Are you trying to prove a point? stop being rude with the artwork
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I'm not being rude about the artwork. I just commented on it, I just felt like you were trying not to be rude about the critique.
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No i was saying the truth in what i see and i thought about what it would do and make sure it wouldn't hurt her it was really nice work and your gonna and ruin how she fells about i call that being rude just because you don't like it usually when they put "Critique" They wanna here the good things not how you think it's horrible at somethings
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When someone asks for a critique, people are supposed to be critical about it. That's what it is, YOU judge the artwork. The artists feelings don't matter. And if she doesn't notice, people on here ARE critical. Critiques, are 'bout flaws in the artwork. And such. I'm not rude just because I reply with my personal opinion about your critique, if I was rude I would have called you names or something. But, I didn't.
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It wasn't my artwork actually
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I commented to your critique, if you haven't noticed.
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idc = I don't care can't you take a hint?
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I know what that means, and when you use, " idc " in an argument it doesn't make you look smart, neither does you telling me what it means. When I already know the meaning to it.
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I don't try sounding smart i know i am and i don't care if i show it or not
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Nice way to sound cocky and full of yourself.
I never asked if you were smart. You kind of want to show you're smart here, or people will be on you. A lot.
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Actually i'm not a person for myself i never only think for myself but i only sound like it now because i'm talking to you not one of my friends,and Besides why are you on my case all of the sudden
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You DID sound like it. Also, I'm not on your case, I only commented because I thought that critique was VERY poorly did. You were supposed to be critical, and give comments on how she could be better 8I
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IT WONT LET ME SAY ITS FAIR DX but thanks! maybe u should re-critque it lol but thanks i no i love the fishnet on her legs 
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My Deviantart doesn't seem to be working today, so I'm gonna post my critique here.
Whoa, man.
Uh. Tailmouths I actually approve of, but the colors here...jesus christ. I think you should tone it down a little bit, possibly make some of the colors a little less bright. And perhaps a little less random, so the character will be easy to draw more than once. Then...are those...stockings? What is this thing wearing on its legs? I can't tell what they are. Also, is your character a stripper? I'm not being rude, I'm seriously asking. I guess some people dig that stuff, but...perhaps you should train her tail to be a little more tolerant of people before you sign her up for that occupation.
Sorry if this was considered too harsh or something, just voicing my opinion here.
Also, were you high when you drew this?
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"Also, we're you high when you drew this?"
This person is obviously high all the time. XD
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DUUUDE.
I FUCKING LOVE YOU.
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I LOVE YOU TOO YOU RANDOM BUT BEAUTIFUL HUMAN BEING
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YES.
WE WILL NAME THEM DILDO AND HYMEN.
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OH MY GOD LET'S BE BEST FRIENDS.
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"but...perhaps you should train her tail to be a little more tolerant of people before you sign her up for that occupation."
lolol that line was wonderful! XD
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ahaha thank you very much~
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I did a critique, but the person declined it.
Also, those are fishnets.
They are used in stripping.
so.... owo
and other stuff )
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I saw yours 
...Pfthahahaha
Even without the fishnets the first word that came to mind was stripper :'D
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so post a critique in the comments?
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The poor thing needs to be put out of its misery! XD
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