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CataquackWarrior [2018-02-09 19:33:52 +0000 UTC]
It would be wonderful if, once Hook's inside, we get to see Tinkerbell spying on Hook, even if she's just a small feature in the background. It would help set the stage for the next part where she tells Peter everything she saw.
And on that note, I'm hoping you'll do justice to that scene in the book, as the description, with Tink first knocking but refusing to answer and Peter being all playful, then her offering three guesses, and her finally spilling out what she's learned "in one ungrammatical sentence, as long as the ribbons that conjurers [magicians] pull from their mouths". I've always felt that that moment captures the playful, mischievous natures of both Peter and Tink, and show how they complement each other so well.
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TriaElf9 In reply to CataquackWarrior [2018-02-10 02:15:26 +0000 UTC]
Tink doesn't spy from the inside, she only overhears him muttering about it in the forest as he's heading back to the ship, which is how she's knows the medicine is poisoned, but doesn't know how he got down there.
Of course, I'll be sticking to the book as closely as possible ^_^ It's difficult when Barrie keeps retconning things in that weren't there before lol, but I'll do my best.
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CataquackWarrior In reply to TriaElf9 [2018-02-10 16:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. I wasn't quite sure when and where she had saw Hook. I still hope you give the energetic and vivid feeling of the scene where Tink informs Peter, though, as I'm looking forward to that.
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TriaElf9 In reply to CataquackWarrior [2018-02-11 04:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I'd also forgotten until I reread that part, the other versions out there tend to sneak in to our memories I think. We'll see how the scene feels when I get to it, not sure how it'll speak to me until I thumbnail it ^_^
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huggiebird [2018-02-05 17:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh no! The hat comes off! Seriousness starts now....uh oh Peter....
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huggiebird In reply to TriaElf9 [2018-02-10 12:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Great work as always <3
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TheAussieBlue [2018-02-04 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't think he's going to fit.
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TriaElf9 In reply to TheAussieBlue [2018-02-05 03:51:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, the smile would at least hint that it looks good, he just probably can't be wearing all his extra stuff lol ^_^
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TheAussieBlue In reply to TriaElf9 [2018-02-05 06:46:32 +0000 UTC]
If he ends up suck halfway through, I want you to know that I saw it coming.
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