shizu-inuzuka [2017-08-17 06:28:29 +0000 UTC]
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The coloring and line-art is super well done! The pose looks very nice, and the colors are wonderful. The only issue is the eyes. They take up a lot of space on her face, and should be farther down, leaving space for her forehead. The eyes should always be in the middle of the face. The hips also need to be a bit bigger, since her body looks a little bit "straight". Otherwise, it is a fantastic piece of art, with eye-catching visuals. Very very well done. I sincerely hope I get to see more art from you. -Shii <3
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Twinkiesama In reply to shizu-inuzuka [2017-08-18 00:23:33 +0000 UTC]
I agree that the eyes need to be farther down the head. I have a difficult time trying to get the placement of the eyes, nose, and mouth on moe characters right and it is something I struggle with everyday.Thank you very much for you critique.
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iriscilla [2018-06-26 13:11:27 +0000 UTC]
This is cool, the splash is so nicely done. I love the sparkles! ^^
Twinkiesama In reply to iriscilla [2018-06-26 13:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
GrayComputer [2017-08-18 02:47:12 +0000 UTC]
Cute! ^^
Twinkiesama In reply to GrayComputer [2017-08-18 03:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.