Serah-Valentine [2017-11-05 01:27:44 +0000 UTC]
She looks really nice.
I'm no good with this pose myself so I'm not sure what concrit would help. I get the impression that fixing some of the top's folds would make the pose look more natural, but I'm not sure what else to say. Some of the clouds look a bit odd (the ones near the bottom). Maybe if they were slightly thicker it would look nice?
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Serah-Valentine In reply to Twinkiesama [2017-11-05 04:24:52 +0000 UTC]
It's good that they're smaller, but I guess they could have more shape. I'm not the best at clouds either just yet.
You're very welcome.
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