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Veltro — RoN: Atola vs Zitapg3

Published: 2010-07-25 07:37:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 8
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Description Don't get too cocky there, Zita But she's gonna learn her lesson for punching Atola in the face next page. You're such a bitch, Zita )<

Anyway *SLAPPED* At least the lines don't sound so corny this page. And sorry the color is so funky e.e I don't know how to fix it, but when I save the file other than a .sai file, the picture sorta looks....like someone went crazy with the dodge tool. I've tried to fix it, but nothing's working. Or maybe I'm imagining it since I'm so tired. *SLAPPED* And Atola's supposed to be sending out gusts of wind with her wings if you guys can't tell. I wasn't able to do that well either ;_;

Sorry if I'm butchering your character, hakkari ;.; I'm trying my best.

And I'm going to submit the unblurred and no caption version of my scraps and will link it here. I will also link the pages together once I submit every page.

No funky edit version (but still weird colored): [link]

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Atola Mari (c)
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athas [2010-07-25 23:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, they're really going at it. Nice hit. Atola is drawn in a great dynamic pose in the top panel.

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Veltro In reply to athas [2010-08-01 06:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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