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Description "S-stay back!"

"Haha." The young bat pony smiled.

Moments passed, and the young unicorn was still shaking. The batony's smile faded.

"...Oh, you're serious."

"Come any closer and I'll unleash my magic on you, vermin!" She was quivering at an alarming rate now. 

"Alright, alright-" the batpony backed away to a safe distance. She'd only heard rumors of the power of unicorn horns, but she wasn't about to take her chances. "This far enough for ya?"

"P-perfect." The unicorn sighed in relief, but she was visibly rattled from the situation.

"I'm Luna!" 

The unicorn's eyes turned dark. "What? No- get out of my lands. This is unicorn territory. You-you killers have your own territory."

"Killers? Hah!" Luna almost fell backwards in laughter. "You're not serious, are you? That's hilarious!" She was giggling.

The unicorn's eye twitched. "This isn't funny. Go back to where you came from or I'll call my guards to exterminate you."

"That makes it sound like you're the killer, silly. Besides, you've got the history all wrong. I always heard rumors about the Unicorn Clans, but I can't believe I'm seeing one for real now! You're pretty." Her tail wagged.

The unicorn's stance became less cautious. She relaxed just a bit, clearly confused. "What are you talking about?"

"The unicorns are the ones who drove the batponies out. We didn't do anything to you guys, but you used those pesky horns of yours to ensure we got the message. So we all left, and now we kinda just live in isolation. We don't have a territory like you said. Half of us don't even have homes."

Her head tilted. "That... doesn't sound right. You're forgetting the part where you guys started the war. Your kind went on a killing rampage. You killed unicorn mothers- even children- the strongest of our guards. You've got it wrong."

"Well, I can definitely say that I didn't start any wars," she smiled. "And I never heard anything about a killing rampage. Don't you think that would've kept happening or something? If we were all killers thirsty for blood, wouldn't we sneak back into your pretty castles and kill some more?"


"Hm." She sat.

"What's your name?" Luna smiled, her tail wagging again.

"I'd never tell you," she snarled. "I don't want any batponies having my name." 

"Okay, weirdo," Luna chuckled. "I think you're nice, though. Wanna be friends?"

"Are you-are you serious?" Now the unicorn was laughing. "I was out for my afternoon stroll, having a pleasant day, when out of nowhere a batpony falls out of a tree and lands in front of me. We're not meant to be interacting, let alone conversing. I should've killed you the second I saw you, but at the same time... I'd never want to stoop to the level of your kind. Go back to where you came from before I change my mind. I'll forget I ever saw you- I won't have my guards come after you, and you can live freely knowing a unicorn saved your life. Maybe then you'll see we are superior in mind and body, and that we mean no disrespect- we simply want to protect our own."

"Wowie, was that a speech. I'll take that as a no to the friendship offer." Luna inched closer to her, examining her hair. It was long, styled, and obviously well taken care of. She frowned, exhaling deeply as she realized how much she wanted that.

"Di-did you not hear me? I told you not to come any closer." Her horn started to light up- it was instinct. 

"I haven't done anything to raise your suspicion. You're judging me based on a story you heard when you were probably a foal. I always wanted to see what unicorns looked like, maybe become friends and spend time together. But I can tell the lies you grew up on have you convinced."

The unicorn was speechless.

Luna backed away from her again, a smile growing wide on her face. "Either way... I'll be here same time tomorrow! Meet me here and we can play." Her ears perked and tail wagged side to side in excitement.

"I-"

"See ya then!" She started bouncing away.

"Wait! I'm not coming here-"

Luna turned around again. "Aw, come on. It'll be fun! I'll be here even if you won't be. And the day after, too. And the one after that. When you're ready to play, I'll be waiting." She smiled, then continued hopping away.

The unicorn didn't know what to say. "O-okay. My name's- my name's Celestia! Remember that, okay?" she called.

"See ya tomorrow, Tia!"

Celestia's face flushed red in anger, but before she could respond to the nickname, Luna was out of sight. "See you tomorrow," she grumbled under her breath.


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- This is an AU world where Celestia and Luna are not siblings. Earth ponies don't exist in this world, either- it's just unicorns and batponies. There's been a lifelong war for as long as anyone can remember between the two species. The unicorns are cooped up all comfy and cozy in their big castles, while the majority of batponies are homeless. Luna doesn't have a home- she bounces around from location to location. She hasn't had her hair cut in years, but she's at least able to clean herself in the rivers nearby. 

- The two species live very far apart, and for good reason. No one really knows what happened that started the ongoing feud between them, but it's had a lasting impact. It's up for interpretation, and both sides have their own different stories.

- Back when there was no war, the batponies and unicorns lived happily among each other. They would marry without discrimination or judging eyes. Some of those batpony genes have carried over... Sometimes, unicorn couples will give birth to a batpony foal. This is considered incredibly taboo, and they immediately disown their batpony child. It's unknown what happens to the foals. 

- Celestia is the daughter of the Duke who rules over all the unicorn clans. She'll inherit this role, being the only child in her family. 

- Tia and Luna form a bond so strong that after dozens of years, they reunite unicorns and batponies. It doesn't go well at all and has a very rocky start. But they both become heroes to millions- batponies start to depict Celestia with angel-like wings, and unicorns honor Luna with a horn. No one knows if it's true, but it's rumored the two ended up gaining these physical features as a symbol of their service. They die after their lifespan ends, but it's said they become "alicorns," and they are depicted as such in drawings and history books. 


Here's a flat color version of this, cuz I like it! It shows their colors better but I decided the shaded version added more depth to the final piece



Got the background from here: Pine Forest


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I really love doing these AU type things :'))

Here's some more AU stuff I've done in the past!

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Comments: 22

Elena-Naqua [2022-03-22 14:07:40 +0000 UTC]

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Venommocity In reply to Elena-Naqua [2022-03-22 16:02:28 +0000 UTC]

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shoji9 [2020-03-15 15:02:29 +0000 UTC]

I keep expecting Luna to stick out her tongue and "Pbbbbbbbbth!" at Celestia. 

 I solemnly swear I am up to no good! 

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Venommocity In reply to shoji9 [2020-03-19 23:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that probably did happen at some point during this conversation! 

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ZomberryTea [2020-02-28 04:04:10 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe I MISSEDTHIS! Curses deviantart's notification system is a nightmare. To the main matter! I absolutely adore this!! Celestia and Luna are canonically not actually sisters in my universe so this read was just delightful! I love how Luna is more friendly and playful wheras Celestia is much more hostile, it creates a very prominent difference between the two races straight away, amazing storytelling! I love the idea of the two being close friends that grow up to reunite their homes for good. The innocence of youth is portrayed so well in how just meeting someone can change your perspective. Great work as always! <3

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Venommocity In reply to ZomberryTea [2020-03-14 01:00:25 +0000 UTC]

I feel you there :') But thank you!! I know pony genes are hella random in the MLP world (Pinkie being... ~pink~ in a family of dull coated pones), but Tia and Luna are legit complete opposites. I always saw them as symbolic sisters who just "adopted" each other as siblings, in a way? Your comment is so thoughtful, I'm really happy all those details shined through. Thank you so much! (: 

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Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy [2020-02-18 02:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Ooh neat! Love the colors!

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Venommocity In reply to Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy [2020-02-21 01:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! 

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unoriginaI [2020-02-18 01:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Yesssssssss, Luna x Celestia is one of my favs

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Venomlion3 [2020-02-18 00:36:42 +0000 UTC]

WOWW Ven I love this AU!!! The idea that Celestia and Luna became alicorns because they earned the respect of the batponies/unicorns is so cool!! I've never considered that before,,,,you have so many good ideas

Also LOVE the dialogue!! You always make such realistic and fun to read dialogue :"D

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Venommocity In reply to Venomlion3 [2020-02-21 00:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Venom!!! Don't make me cry omg ;-;-; I always loved the idea that they maybe weren't sisters (especially cuz they look 0% alike) sO I WAS LIKE "ok AU time." Obviously inspired by you, and I seriously mean that, your AU ideas blow me outta the w o r l d tbh

Thanks again!! I always get so stressed about dialogue lol, but I'm really glad to hear it went over well!

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Venomlion3 In reply to Venommocity [2020-02-21 08:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Of course!!! I can totally see that!! I personally do see them as sisters but it's always fun to think outside the box a bit x3 And SDKASKDJLKJSF VEN,,,,,you're so sweet I'm gonna cry

Oh gosh I do too, don't worry about it xD Dialogue can be pretty hard to write (and make seem realistic) but you do it really well!!!

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Annabear1211 [2020-02-17 22:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love this AU!?!? and the design for them is amazing!!!

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Venommocity In reply to Annabear1211 [2020-02-21 00:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks girl!! It means a lot, I'm really happy you like their designs.  

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Annabear1211 In reply to Venommocity [2020-02-21 01:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol you’re very welcome!!! And of course!!! <33

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LunarCherub [2020-02-17 20:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Omg this is one of the most unique MLP AU's I've ever read, and it's so cute too! <33
I love how their depictions as alicorns are really just how they were both drawn as an honor to reuniting both the species, it's so good and very accurate to how history can get muddled overtime e u e

Great work!

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Venommocity In reply to LunarCherub [2020-02-21 00:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I'm really happy you like that part, I was super excited to write it. I really love incorporating small details from real life that'd be applicable in the magical candy world of Equestria. (: 

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LunarCherub In reply to Venommocity [2020-02-21 01:06:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! <33
That's really some of the best stuff about your HC's and AU's Ven, they're always so good and have that touch of real life that just makes them all the more unique. Please keep up the great work cause I can't wait to see what else you do > w <

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KOLOREDKAT [2020-02-17 20:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Woah I really like this o: Great job!

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Venommocity In reply to KOLOREDKAT [2020-02-21 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I really appreciate it. (:

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owlcoholik [2020-02-17 20:36:41 +0000 UTC]

I love this! Such a cute story, feels like something you’d see in one of the old MLP movies

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Venommocity In reply to owlcoholik [2020-02-21 00:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad that feel came across

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