Comments: 15
CountingRainDrops [2012-01-12 23:22:24 +0000 UTC]
great job!! I think its wonderful and I loved that part
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TF141Soldier [2011-08-25 23:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Let me give you a little criticism:
First, it's a creation by WICKED. It's not supposed to be a living creature, just a metal monster. Therefore it should have more armor-ish stuff. And they defeated the monster by smashing the light bulbs. I don't see those.
And it's pockmarked, with five fingers not the length of regular human fingers. Sorry, but it's not how I pictured it.
But amazing coloring
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Ravia22441 [2011-04-24 23:56:13 +0000 UTC]
Uh, the book is called the scorch trials
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VixSky In reply to Ravia22441 [2011-04-25 13:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I know.
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OurWorldisBeautiful [2011-02-09 21:35:35 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome! I just finished the book today, spooky right?
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