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she was my lunar girl.because she controlled my moods like the tide,
and how do you cage a moonbeam?
and she was my sunshine girl.
because she was the center of my orbit,
and nothing shone as brightly as her smile.
and she was my star girl,
because of course there were other girls but none quite like her,
and we were separated by a million miles.
but what do you say when they ask how it feels to lose everything?
when your only star goes supernova?
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Beautiful. That's the first word that comes to mind. The flow, the idea and the word selection.
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oh, man, so long ago .. here:
but what do you say when they ask how it feels to lose everything?
when every planet in your solar system explodes?
thank you. (:
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ohh okay 
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Again, everyone has already said everything. I guess I am going to have to read everything you have written to get to know you and then right something about you that might can sum up what everyone is saying. Big Project I think.
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aha, thank you. 
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I have read some of your stuff. If I were to respond to each and everyone the way they made me feel. I am afraid that you would either fall in love with me or run screaming because you could not stand that much love (besides the fact that I might not live up to the image I portray, I try).
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aha, i think i love you anyway. (;
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Careful, you might be falling for a monster.
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Maybe a reforming monster.
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as in you were once a monster?
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Though alcohol is not my problem, a recovering monster can be likened to a recovering alcoholic. We have to take it one day at a time.
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i suppose that's true for anyone - one day at a time.
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Q.Q Please someone someday say these things about me?
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don't worry. someone will.
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methanks you. where i live, you can almost always see the stars. (:
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yeah. it means i can make a wish every night.
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ah, don't worry, someday someone will. i'm sure.
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Awww thanks a lot!!! You're the bestest!
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! this is amazing! and nope, the last line was just awesome! :> i don't know what else to say cuz this is just fantastic. @_@
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thank you soo much!
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hm.. our love seems to keep growing. devious.
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Me and you or you and everyone else?
Either way, it's definitely a good thing!
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all of the above. and, yes, hurray!
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canada rules. just saying. [watching the olympics - never have i ever felt quite so nationalistic 
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and now they're done. [heavy sigh] i love olympic time!
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Marry me.
Gah. You're amazing, this is amazing, the edit is wonderful although I'd like to know what it was before!
Great analogies and although they seem "cliche", I've never seen anyone use them the way you have here, so, you're awesome.
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absolutely.
i love your comments, i mean besides the fact that they make me feel like singing, they are also constructive.
and just for you:
but what do you say when they ask how it feels to lose everything?
when every planet in your solar system explodes?
love you, as always.
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Specifically
she was the center of my orbit,
and nothing shone as brightly as her smile.
and because of course there were other girls but none quite like her.
That's the kind of thing I meant when I said it was a bit cliche. I really like the first stanza though, and the celestial theme throughout.
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okay, i guess i see what you mean. is it okay though?
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