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WDWParksGal β€” Halloween 2005

Published: 2005-11-11 02:58:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 296; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Come on back, don't leave me here!! I'm not dead, not even near!
Scratching my way back to the top, my head's above, why don't you stop?
My hands are free, my neck feels stuck.Β Β It's hard to move in all this muck.
I see the moon, I hear a howl - Spirits are rising, it's Halloween now -
I must be dead - I only see all ghostly figures surrounding me.
It must be over, the life I had; I see the light, so don't be sad.
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Comments: 5

arachibutyrophobic [2007-05-21 05:08:24 +0000 UTC]

great rhyming flow to the piece.

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WDWParksGal In reply to arachibutyrophobic [2007-05-21 05:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ~ each Halloween I write a new piece to put on a pretend tombstone. Most of the time I forget to keep a copy but took a picture of that one! I write poems for cards and prose for events and write special pieces for family or class reunions. Just something to do in my spare time.

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arachibutyrophobic In reply to WDWParksGal [2007-05-21 18:06:50 +0000 UTC]

well it's a great thing to do, so i'm looking forward to seeing some more.

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Fantasyfairy1 [2007-05-16 18:39:16 +0000 UTC]

I like this, short, and to the point. Very good.

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WDWParksGal In reply to Fantasyfairy1 [2007-05-18 00:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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