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Published: 2004-09-08 17:05:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 3012; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 944
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Hmm. Beautiful as all your work is.
However- a thing I noticed. In the second panel, Black Dude (Omar? Not sure) looks totally calm... Then switches into rage in the third. FOr the effect I think you're going for (the set-up panel before the tell-off), he should at the very least (in fact, perhaps this is the best choice, as it shows passage of time) look at least marginally pissed, a furrowed eyebrow, lip curled, something of that sort (I think that explanation of what I mean is rather pointless, sicne you have a damn good grasp of facial expressions).
Good job overall. I do like how you make these (what was it exactly, all the panels drawn on seperate sheets then put into PS?), most comicers I've seen do it all on one thing.
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now that you pointed it out, yeah, i think i missed that detail on Omar's reaction. yeah. thanks dude. I always appreciate observations such as yours.
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Woah. And here I thought my comment would get lost in the flow of comments artists of your calibur tend to attract.
Aaannnyyywaaaayyyy, no prob, Wen-Man. Haha.
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Yeah man, you tell Lenny what for....make him come to his senses!
Great job with the cross-hatching
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This's soooo awesome! Do you consider this one of your unfinished projects? If so, you should definitely finish it!!^^
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wow! really love the line/cross-hatched style of this. looks really cool, kinda gives it a gritty reality. good story idea too!
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Interesting how you expressed so well the enragement of the black guy..I like how the background is blurred..very nice.
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yeah! stick it to the man. this is kinda like a soap opera in slow mo.
I can't believe the detail you put in it.
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