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whiteshaix β€” Atlantis 1-005

Published: 2007-03-18 22:59:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 3476; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description I had already drawn all the panels some months ago... So, what better way to spend a Sunday? All colored within the last 24 hours.
The place's named "Heinlein's Pub" after one of my favourite writers. ^^

Many thanks to MysteryMan91 who's helping me to improve my translations!

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**Revised version. Two panels have been changed.
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Comments: 33

Aileene [2007-09-14 00:50:21 +0000 UTC]

The colors you have are gorgeous and the story is intriguing, although it seems a bit slow at this point, but most comic/books/stories are at this point where everyone and everything is being introduced. You've still done it in a way that I want to keep reading to find out what happens next.

--Aileene

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whiteshaix In reply to Aileene [2007-09-26 13:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The action will come soon, if I have time to go on with the comic...

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Elfgirl82 [2007-04-28 20:29:25 +0000 UTC]

*_* mammamia che bella questa tavola.... concordo con Ilweran, il tipo Γ¨ decisamente interessante!! :Q____

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EdwinBG2 [2007-04-02 05:46:04 +0000 UTC]

I think "the black knights" would sound better...

why in german? Do you speak german?

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whiteshaix In reply to EdwinBG2 [2007-04-02 08:19:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't, but Jan *is* German and I wanted his squad to have a German name. Besides I like the sound.

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EdwinBG2 In reply to whiteshaix [2007-04-02 11:32:42 +0000 UTC]

ah..^^

If you need a transhilation aks me XD

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whiteshaix In reply to EdwinBG2 [2007-04-02 11:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm pretty sure I will need your help. One of my friends speaks German very well and gave me some suggestions, but he works in export and he's never at home.

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EdwinBG2 In reply to whiteshaix [2007-04-02 12:47:38 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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rej- [2007-03-23 15:48:03 +0000 UTC]

I colori di questa pagina mi piacciono tantissimo, sono davvero intensi!

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whiteshaix In reply to rej- [2007-03-23 22:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Spero che non lo siano TROPPO... Dopo aver provato a stampare gli ultimi lavori mi sono resa conto che venivano fuori troppo pallidi e ho capito di avere il monitor regolato male, ora non avrΓ² esagerato nell'altra direzione? Oo

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rej- In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-27 17:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Uhm, non saprei, ma a me così intensi piacciono

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Ilweran [2007-03-22 22:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Ho un debole per questo ragazzo... Adoro la quarta vignetta!!

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whiteshaix In reply to Ilweran [2007-03-22 23:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Ho la vaga impessione che col procedere della storia ti piacerΓ  anche di piΓΉ...

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Ilweran In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-22 23:13:10 +0000 UTC]

*fa i classici "occhioni scintillanti e pieni di aspettativa" a queste parole* *___* yay!!!

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tenshianna [2007-03-20 14:01:25 +0000 UTC]

thats absolutely amazing!!

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mayahs [2007-03-19 13:47:49 +0000 UTC]

moreeee please

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whiteshaix In reply to mayahs [2007-03-19 13:56:53 +0000 UTC]

I have all the drawings for page 6 ready... But first I have to finish a pair of commissions

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mayahs In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-19 13:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Okiesss , will wait you

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nekomukuro [2007-03-19 11:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Che bello *o* Mi piacciono molto gli occhioni blu del ragazzo

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whiteshaix In reply to nekomukuro [2007-03-19 11:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Julian viene fuori caruccio...

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Cervo86 [2007-03-19 11:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Belo.bello e ancora bello!!!

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Kanuka76 [2007-03-19 09:01:44 +0000 UTC]

Bene bene, speriamo che proceda bene. Magari facendogli pubblicitΓ  in piΓΉ posti trovi qualcuno che ti pubblichi

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whiteshaix In reply to Kanuka76 [2007-03-19 10:15:32 +0000 UTC]

...Intanto postandolo qui riesco ad aggiustare la traduzione, così evito figuracce...

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Caipirina [2007-03-19 00:16:57 +0000 UTC]

*o* that is some really cool painting!

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MysteryMan91 [2007-03-18 23:20:11 +0000 UTC]

What does he mean by novelty? The special unit?

Or is he talking about a list of jobs?

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whiteshaix In reply to MysteryMan91 [2007-03-18 23:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... I think I'll send you next pages for corrections BEFORE submitting here! ^^

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MysteryMan91 In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-18 23:32:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I would be happy to help. Do you want an email, or will you just put them in scraps first?

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whiteshaix In reply to MysteryMan91 [2007-03-19 10:26:47 +0000 UTC]

I'll put them in scraps...

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MysteryMan91 In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-19 23:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Will do.

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whiteshaix In reply to MysteryMan91 [2007-03-18 23:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes, the novelty is the special unit. Doesn't sound too good to me, but I don't know how to say it better....

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MysteryMan91 In reply to whiteshaix [2007-03-18 23:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I get it now. Try saying it "Now let's look at this 'Novelty' unit..."

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whiteshaix In reply to MysteryMan91 [2007-03-19 10:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Larissa-Rasputin [2007-03-18 23:15:27 +0000 UTC]

Holy cow you're fast! Superb colors as always. Looking forward to the next page.

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