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Published: 2004-07-24 03:42:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Laying on the earthShocked an amazed
For when I stretch out my hand
It shatters away
Scared and frighten
Happy and thrilled
The clouds of venis
And the kiss of Aphrodity
With one last breath
We say our dues
For I was a sailor seeking my fortune
And you were a maid searching for love
Who would have thought when combined?
We became 2
If I had any regrets there would only be one
That I didn’t say goodbye, when I took my plunge
I will look down upon your life
Shocked an amazed
But I will never stop loving you
While you finish life’s maze.
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wow this is a small piece but very intense luc
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goddamnit luc i love your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! that is beautiful...
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I enjoyed the poem but i especially liked the last stanza but mostly the last line!!!
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