RainyDaySmile [2005-11-09 05:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Work on your grammar, and try making the rhymes seem a little less forced. I like the rhythm, and you start off strong--just keep it going. Good stuff. ^_^
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worldsapart In reply to nowherejuggalette [2005-07-13 16:26:38 +0000 UTC]
just a poem, dont worry
as for the topic, you should be able to figure that out
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