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Published: 2005-07-12 03:50:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Scared to move
Scared to cry
Why wont this world pass me by
I am easy to forget
Easy to forgive
Why don’t you stop and think
And just let me live
Paralyzed mind
Helpless body
Trapped in side emotion
With this rage that’s like an explosion
The Problem’s that grow
With Emotion that flow
The gun by the bed
The knife in the hand
Who would have thought this would be my last stand
Should I shoot my head
Stabbed my chest
Who really cares
I am going to be laid down to rest
Should I leave the note
What would it say
Goodbye?
Farewell?
Sorry you missed my last day…
My body will be raised
The songs will be sung
The tears will come
All because of the bullet I put in that gun…..
I sit on my bed
Ready to go
3
2
1
boom
………nothing……..
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Comments: 3

RainyDaySmile [2005-11-09 05:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Work on your grammar, and try making the rhymes seem a little less forced. I like the rhythm, and you start off strong--just keep it going. Good stuff. ^_^

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nowherejuggalette [2005-07-12 20:50:34 +0000 UTC]

whats this about

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worldsapart In reply to nowherejuggalette [2005-07-13 16:26:38 +0000 UTC]

just a poem, dont worry

as for the topic, you should be able to figure that out

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