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xcaseycakes — in my blissful realm of ignora
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Published: 2009-08-08 03:41:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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in my blissful realm of ignorancei always seem to cease
seeing with my own two eyes -
i start to see with peace
nothing seems to bother me
in this new-found world
there's no such thing as right or wrong
my problems come unfurled
words get merged together
leaving these lips of mine
my mind can't seem to grasp
the simple concept of time
there's always a feast in front of me
i can eat to my heart's content
there aren't any rules or restrictions
no men in suits that dement
i'm free to laugh like a child
i'm free to play my games
with simple rules to follow
and many loud exclaims
laughs that shake me down to the core
vibrations emanating from my soul
when i opened the doors of this world to you
my blissful realm of ignorance became whole
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Comments: 3
Yea I like the concept of this one too. The only thing I see is the 3rd last verse with the men in suits that doesn't make quite as much sense and the last verse doesn't flow as well as the rest of the poem. But other than that I thoroughly enjoyed it lol.
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