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Xxghost-toasterxX — Oceania (new style)
Published: 2017-06-28 23:47:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 363; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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I LOVE THISS SO MUCHH!?!??!btw i am back and im feeling much better! im loving myself today!??!
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This is nice but:
CONS
1: The eyes could use some shine! They look kinda odd without shines
2: I'd suggest either going lineless or going lineart (Or something else). The lineart around her is confusing and stands out too much. Maybe make the outline a darker shade of pink?
3: there are points where the lines go over eachother. maybe go back and fix those before you post it?
4: i'd suggest going all flat colored or all shaded. The eye lids having shading(?) stands out and is distracting
PROS
1: The wings look very nice and cool!
2: The place you put your signature is nice and doesn't stand out too much
3: the paw is AMAZINGLY drawn!
Hope this was helpful!
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This is okay piece of art here. I have a few pros and a few cons, let's start with the cons I just want to state that the colors you've chosen are.... odd it also has this weird gradient only on its eyelids that make the piece look off so that's that part then the overall appearance is just a little weird like the hand (paw) is just there. the pro's of this is that the line work looks amazing, but again that off blue-green is off putting for it. the other pro is that it looks nice not shit (unlike mine).
I hope this is a satisfying critique and have a nice day.
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Love the style! If anything the lines look a little big for the size of the image.
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thank you! im happy that you like it!
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