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YaoiNek0 — Commission- Alolan Vulpix TF
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Published: 2016-09-06 14:10:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 25419; Favourites: 264; Downloads: 89
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Fried ice-cream is dangerous nowDis is improved based on critic nya
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BTW, Awesome new trailer with 4 new pokemon! (Pokémon snap is back people!)
www.youtube.com/watch?v=YR1ssS…
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Sorry but... Im going to write this in spanish:
La técnica es excelente, ME ENCANTA en pocas palabras. Tanto, que me dan ganas de pedir una comisión. Yo estoy empezando con esto y sé que el concepto de generar piel o cambiar partes es el lado más difícil. Dejar un lado humano mientras transcurre la transformación es la mejor idea de todas, y tu haces buen uso de ello. Yo, también, lo uso. Muy buena la idea de empezar la transformación por la cabeza, que es donde tocó el objeto que genera la transformación. Es algo que... No se explicar... Tu técnica es excelente, solo pondría que pusieses algunos retoques en la piel más, pero comprendo que en este caso as recurrido al lado chibi. Aún así, mi critica será muy buena.
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Vision: This tf have some really "cool" color scheme! Alolan Vulpix is known for mostly white but you took an advantage of the light blue color and used it as a tone for many effects and backgrounds. It looks very impressive and the design, anatomy, and other visuals are outstanding with amazing depth, trying new things, and so many outstanding shot angles. This is a nit pick but I'm not sure about the blending of brown to blue in the 5th panel (I know there's a bit blue on the 4th but it's not TOO distracting). Overall, outstanding work and so many fun highlights!
Originality: Again, pokemon tfs are very common and because of the rise of Alolan Vulpix, it's not too surprising how popular that little Arctic fox is becoming but I do take credit of the Fried Vanilla ice tf trigger (though i'm not sure heated melted ice cream can turn you into regular vulpix e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Technique: With great visuals comes great technique. The tf is filled with different techniques and I just love how this turns out because the expressions, the tf sequence, and the anatomy is amazing. Different angles mean something to the tf and the different effects, defined background, and details define this tf. Though, there are a few tiny anatomy flaws like the 2nd last panel how one of the feet looks unnaturally flat and the Alolan Vulpix tails look like one fluffy fat tail. Overall, your technique is amazing and although you have tiny flaws anatomy-wise, I believe you'll keep improving .
Impact: Now, looking at the tf as a whole, it looks amazing: the chill expression of Akira, the excited emotion from the victim, the shocked, confused, and even embarrassing expressions. Those appropriate emotions fit and it's something genuine that makes reader's enjoy as well. Yes, Alolan Vulpix does add in some "cute" points but it's existence fits well with the theme: the fried vanilla ice cream, the Alolan Vulpix type, and small details like the loss of heat through sweat.
This tf alone, is a fantastic tf picture. I love the composition you composed overall and with details. I hope you continue to draw more awesome contents and good luck with the rest of your commissions! ^w^
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First, I want to say I commissioned this comic, yet, I will make a fair critique.
Vision :
The comic is clearly appealing at first sight. Dynamic panels, comfortable reading that let a lot of spaces to let the eye travel easily and an use of colors that hook the eye from start to finish.
Originality :
Let's be honest, Pokemons and Transformations aren't the most original things around DA since last years. However, the trigger of this Transformation comic is quite interresting and it's actually pretty rare to see it in a lot of Transformations of this kind.
Technique :
Works a little with the Vision part. The technique here is really well worked.
The panels are dynamics and let the eye flow easily during the story.
The gradient of colors from hot ones (red, purple) to cold ones (Blue especially) to represent the change to an Ice type is a really welcomed touch.
The lines are used efficiently and the color pencils are also used in the right way. Not only to color, but to hook the eye on the important part.
Impact :
The whole thing make a large impact on the eye and is really stunning from start to finish. The finish being for sure, the more impactful panel by its place in the comic and the details put in the line and colors.
Honorable mention for the 7th panel where the emotion is at its peek with a wonderful work on the expression.
Conclusion :
A wonderful transformation comic which do all right from the start to finish. From style to story telling. From human to Pokemon.
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I'm a big fan of this transformation piece for obvious reasons. It features one of my favorite pokemon in its new variant form and the overall feel of your transformations feel so clean and smooth.
All the panels have something important in them and they transition without any awkward moments in between. You got the manga feel perfectly even the way you read it which can be weird for people who's use to reading left to right but that isn't too distracting.
I absolutely love the trigger for the transformation. It just feels so fitting and appropriate given the end result and it's something I've never seen before. The transformation itself is shown is enough to work with the overall effect given you can see the human to vulpix transition and even clothes falling off which is my favorite part of any transformation.
That combined with a good art style. A good flow and overall good concept makes this one of my favorite art pieces from you.
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Looks like I'll be spending the next few hours pondering how to fry ice cream...
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life's biggest questions
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Wait
does it go left-right of right-left
It seems to switch between pages
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Yah. My bad on that part.
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I still don't understand the logic behind fried ice cream. I guess it's fitting that the paradox of heated ice causes the paradox of Pokémon transformation.
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Oh my gosh, I thought I'd never see Akira's face again. XD
It's been such a long time since I've seen him, unless I'm wrong.
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It appears to be so. Perhaps it is due to his popularity that i wanted to give him a break. Or maybe as the artist, Fez wanna TF someone itself nyahaha
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I suggest you keep the formatting constant. The top rows have it right to left, but the bottom is left to right, but it should just be one or the other.
Btw, you said the trailer reveals 4 new Pokemon, but UB-01 isn't confirmed to be a Pokemon, just an "Ultra Beast". It could be a Pokemon, but it also might not be.
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I guess I'm subscribed to be turned into cute critters, haha.
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I'd normally go with a "cold/ice" related pun, but I guess I have to be a bit more creative than that
But anyway, amazing "Fox Pokémon" TF I have to say
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Oh! I actually didn't expected it since I didn't send you the points yet, haha. Doing that asap though!
I love it! And the fact that IRL I love vanilla ice cream is actually a nice coincidence, haha x)
Thanks a lot!
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Fez is physic kitty nya nya nya
So very glad you like dis nya
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That's deserved x)
Just sent you the points
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