IAmTheDarkStar [2008-06-24 07:00:52 +0000 UTC]
You could shape better her legs, those are just two cilinders. Try also thicker eyelids or highlighting lips. Her face doesn't look very feminine imho.
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yoshkthefan In reply to IAmTheDarkStar [2008-06-24 07:07:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your crit. Yeah, I realized her legs were wonky after I was done coloring it and I was just so tired and didn't feel like changing them. Perhaps one day I will go back and fix them.
With regards to the other stuff, though, this is a piece of fan art and I wanted to keep the character true to her original self. She's a 10-year-old girl, so she's not quite as feminine as, say, a 20-something year old. I just draw 'em like I see 'em.
But thanks, anyway. :] I appreciate any and all help I can get with my art.
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