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Heilerkatze [2017-11-06 22:29:48 +0000 UTC]

I should probably leave a comment haha

So lets start with something good
i love the full drawing in overall, the colors are very well choosen and the candle puts the whole scene in a kind of relaxing atmosphere, the colors of the tiger´s skin as well as his clothes stands out pretty well, tieing the viewers eyes on the tiger pretty fast when you look at the whole picture for the first time! even tho some lines  arent straight they pretty much look like that wich is just amazing!

now some ideas for improvement
( because im such a bad kitty and cant just say its perfect! im such a nitpicky cat! )

the tigers left arm ( if you pretend youre the tiger ) looks like it has no elbow
maybe some additional shading would help

the tigers tail could curl a little ( its really just a little! ) more
( personal preference tho : P )

the blue book on the right side of the picture ( next to the tiger ) looks like its flying
( A FLYING BOOK I LOVE IT! )

the shelf on the left wall is missing  something on the ground (idk how its called! lol )

i think thats all! i hope you find the comment helpfull

i cant read spanish ( is that even spanish idk! lol )
so i just followed the others in their comments layout

And Again its a REALLY cool picture!
and sorry for beeing so nitpicky hehe 

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kmkibble75 [2017-01-27 00:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm here from Project Comment:

This piece is really, really well done. I love the level of detail throughout the background – it's not that you have every miniscule bit imaginable, like titles on the books, but that you just hav eso many of them all stacked up so neatly, rather than just colored blobs (like I probably would have done). You took the time and effort tos tack each shelf and to create other various baubles and objects to line them, which really adds to the lived-in feel. This really strikes me as a room I could find in a large home or, as it might be with this character, temple. You do a great job of playing with perspective to make things interesting, but you don't go too crazy with it (namely, the stairs – they're not quite lined up with where they should be on the floor, but it still works).

The one area I would suggest focusing on for improvement would be where the perspective comes into play with the tiger himself. The angle of he head, or the lack of shading beneath it, gives the impression that he's lacking a lower jaw/chin. I think if you darkened the shadow tucked between his nose and hos shoulder, that could create some distance which would then imply more of a jaw. Also, his foot and forearms could you a little more length/shadowing, maybe by adding some shadows to the bends of his elbows or by having a more distinct bend in the shadows that are there. Right now, the one on his left arm almost runs straight down fro his shoulder to his wrist, when it should have a pretty significant bend at the elbow.

The colors are really well done, making the main character stand out, and I love how you worked the lighting. That can be tricky sometimes, but you really nailed it.

Alright, that's all I have – let me know if there's anything I missed that you were hoping to get an opinion on.

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MinimeNami [2017-01-26 16:35:42 +0000 UTC]

¡Hola! No hablo bien español, so I think I will continue in English

I'm a newbie from ProjectComment

First of all: Great job! I really love the idea how a tiger read some books. This seems very clever to me. The composition of the picture is well done. The tiger is sitting in the golden section and this has a beautiful and an assuasive effect to the viewer. The colours are well chosen, everything is harmonic. The perspective of the shelves looks good. I like how you've taken your time to draw all these little details in the shelves. I know how annoying it can be to draw book for book for book for book

You've thought of the shadows and where they have to be. This is an very important factor and I don't see any misplaced shadows. Well, I am a fan of deep shadows, so I would like to see more darkness – especially at the place where he is sitting or in the back of the shelves. To give the room more deepness, I would have put slight shadows before the shelf at the left. A candle doesn't give so much light to lighten a whole room! The side of the stairs which is far aside the light must be darker too. In my opinion there must be enough shadows, even if it's a non-realistic picture. Courage to shadows!!!  

I envy you for drawing that fur so good. I am a noob at drawing fur, so I am always happy when I see people who can draw them. For the pose I have to agree with my previous speaker from ProjectComment, the leg is in an awkward position. But as she said – just use references and everything will be fine! References at all are super-helpful and make things a lot easier. Also I would draw a harder bow for the tail to make it look more realistic. Maybe it's just me, but I think this isn't the right position for a tail Or, maybe, the end under his leg must have more shadows. I don't know which one would work more fine

All in all – this picture is full of details and love. This is the most important thing and that's why I really like it. It is warming and calming me down. Hope these tips will help you for the next picture.

Hope you have a great day

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WolfLordJake [2017-01-26 01:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Hey dude! I wanted to tell you this piece of art is pretty amazing!  The lifework and whatever method you chose for drawing this piece is certainly a good one! and my that furry looks super sexy and pretty intelligent! I bet he is a nerd who is a book freak! XD
Anyhow please keep up the wonderful and beautiful artwork!! Because honestly I am a furry myself I would definitely leave a fave for this artwork!!
I bet you also make more furry and and if you do, keep going! XD
I wonder what he is studying for btw! XD

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NumillaWafer [2017-01-25 22:19:36 +0000 UTC]

I came from ProjectComment

What caught my eye was the white tiger reading a book. Very cool and creative!!!!

This drawing is awesome, the background is really detailed. The background is simple but it keeps your focus on the tiger. The first thing that draws your eye is the candle, because it has bright colors and is in the center of the page. Also the light emitted from the candle is very accurate. The shadows are soft, and story book like, as NerdBurger65  said. Everything has a nice simple feel, and yet there is still a lot of detail, like the little bit of wax on the candle. The tiger is very well drawn, I like how you can see the fur in the outline.

There are some minor tweaks that could be done in your next drawing. First the leg that we can see of your tiger is in an awkward position. I would recommend looking at a reference picture of someone sitting cross legged. Because his leg would be farther under him, not out in front. Also his paw on his leg is drawn unnaturally, again I would say use a reference of a real paw or another artists paw. I think that if your are not using references you should for things like poses and difficult body parts. Use references from real life because you have to know the rules to break them. Remember, your drawings are alterations of real life. I hope I helped!!!! You are a really amazing artist!!

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NerdBurger65 [2017-01-24 23:39:55 +0000 UTC]

This image makes me feel like I'm inside a children's storybook.
The smooth colours and lines contribute to a calm, relaxed tone.
A quiet moment.

The soft shading also works well.

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ClawProductions334 [2017-01-24 18:12:48 +0000 UTC]

good job

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