MajorMurray In reply to MaKo85 [2011-10-11 02:04:11 +0000 UTC]

It's wonderful! Definitely alien, but strangely humanistic. It's great.

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MaKo85 In reply to MajorMurray [2011-10-11 02:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Whew, I was hoping to get that part right. Since you did specify they are akin to humans, sans the claws :3
Many thanks!

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MajorMurray In reply to NicklausofKrieg [2011-07-25 21:27:08 +0000 UTC]

If you want we can discuss the changes in chat, here.

[link]

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MajorMurray In reply to lamnay [2011-07-09 16:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Anytime.

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MajorMurray In reply to MaKo85 [2011-06-29 03:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

(The faces, they're everywhere)

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MajorMurray In reply to 10thdoctorwhooves [2011-06-26 23:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Sir, I take this comment as a serious insult to my writing abilities.

First, I have done all the things listed, all the cylinders are ready to fire, but I can't choose a target. Out of metaphorical terms, everything is ready, but I can't make it interesting and smooth to read. I have to many commas, to many run on sentences, and way to many sentences starting with and, or, and but. The sentence before was a run on even!

Second, I don't mean to be a Grammar Nazi, your comment is the worst piece of English I have ever read on DA.

Now instead of trying to tell me what to do, how bout you ask me what I'm having problems with next time ok.

The cynicist in me has awoken.

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10thdoctorwhooves In reply to MajorMurray [2011-06-27 00:43:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm not trying to insult you sir and secondly get off my back about my writeing skills - -# you don't see me making fun of others writing skills.

Here's your problem choose something and stick with it .

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MajorMurray In reply to 10thdoctorwhooves [2011-06-27 00:47:59 +0000 UTC]

And there you go with the telling me what to do when you have no idea what I have done. My problem is getting something a person would want to read over and over. A true piece a literary art work, refined and well planned. I have the elements, now I need to figure out have to process them.

It's writing btw.

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10thdoctorwhooves In reply to MajorMurray [2011-06-27 03:21:28 +0000 UTC]

you could just organize it out first this is just a
suggention.

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MajorMurray In reply to NicklausofKrieg [2011-06-25 17:03:02 +0000 UTC]

I keep making manuscripts and then I go back to the start convincing myself that it wasn't good enough.

I have an idea for something, maybe a short story or an opening into one. I suck with Titles though.

Twisted Fairytale, nope

Fairytales Twisted, yeah, nope.

Grey Hunters, nah to generic.

Twisted Fairytales: The Grey Hunter, now I'm just, wait, that could work.

Basically the gist of the opening scene would be a man named Gregory in a cloak fighting a Unicorn. The Unicorn is a blood thirsty beast that feeds on innocence of sentient beings. It would be pretty great, if I could now grammar worth a d***.

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NicklausofKrieg In reply to MajorMurray [2011-06-25 18:10:27 +0000 UTC]

that's a pretty good story you got there you should really pursue the idea

you shouldn't really worry about whether it's good enough or not just try your best and anyway posting stuff here should help you grow your skills especially with all the feedback you'll be getting from people who are into your stuff

i mean my drawing skills went from this [link] to this [link]

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MajorMurray In reply to NicklausofKrieg [2011-08-04 18:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Just got something on my page, please comment.

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MajorMurray In reply to 10thdoctorwhooves [2011-05-19 21:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir, I had one Uncle who fought in the Pacific on my Mother's Dad's side. Uncle Jack Kirby. (Make a joke about Kirby and die)

Thank you again for commenting, I saw you some times on Nick's channel.

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10thdoctorwhooves In reply to MajorMurray [2011-05-19 21:20:11 +0000 UTC]

i had a great grand fahter that served in the navy during operaion overlord (he died from skoeing too much)

and your welcome and yed nick's got some great drawings

im staring a new guard regiment im baseing it off the russian airborn unit.

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MajorMurray In reply to NicklausofKrieg [2011-04-26 22:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank God, I was getting worried. And thanks for the watch, I'm scarred to post anything I write on the internet, because you know, once its on the internet, its ON the internet.

Any who can't wait for that note.

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Baveboi In reply to MajorMurray [2011-05-06 16:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Man, you shouldn't be scared so much of the faceless thousands.
Most people is just not good /or bad/ enough to bring the attention of the interwebs. :3

In any case, thank you for faves. Wait till I get to redo it.

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MajorMurray In reply to Baveboi [2011-08-04 18:14:32 +0000 UTC]

I have something on my page now if you would like to see it.

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MajorMurray In reply to Baveboi [2011-05-06 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, um, thanks. I just fav'ed that after looking for Guardsman art on here and yours I will say in all sense was badass. I have to say, you came to my profile just to comment, your cool in my book man.

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Baveboi In reply to MajorMurray [2011-05-06 19:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Heh. I ain't no superstar man. I like people who likes what I do. We have something in common, you know? haha!
Well, as I said, wait till I finish the remake, then! Better shading, better colors, better positioning, actual bolter-wounds, figurine of the avatar of khaine hidden in the background, every burns, walk inside and dance the dinosaur. haha!

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