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ShivaIII [2017-05-30 22:22:41 +0000 UTC]
Love seeing how Daphne got changed!
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Aritori [2017-04-27 04:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic story! I especially liked the ending. Did Velma also get captured?
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Alonbok77 In reply to Aritori [2017-04-27 04:55:13 +0000 UTC]
No, just Daphne. Velma doesn't know she was taken.
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Aritori In reply to Alonbok77 [2017-04-28 00:04:27 +0000 UTC]
That makes sense. Lovely story though. I like seeing when they enjoy transforming.
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Alonbok77 In reply to Aritori [2017-04-28 02:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, yeah I try to make it so their enjoyment of their transformation is part of them becoming the monster. So her mind will be corrupted or wiped, so she will not know or care that she used to be something else.
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Aritori In reply to Alonbok77 [2017-04-28 02:39:21 +0000 UTC]
Corruption is an interesting idea, so its fun to think how she changed.
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Jaisley23 [2017-04-07 02:10:12 +0000 UTC]
loved your story
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Zgerken [2017-04-06 09:02:14 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant story!
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Alonbok77 In reply to Zgerken [2017-04-06 14:29:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and I thought it was lacking a bit, glad you liked it.
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Zgerken In reply to Alonbok77 [2017-04-06 15:17:43 +0000 UTC]
It wasn't lacking anything, it was a good story, sometimes you need to know when some stories just can't be given more and to do so may ruin them, I've found that out, believe me.
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